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Comments below, requests for help etc. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 21:49, April 11, 2016 (UTC)

edit UnNews:Long John Silver: I divested from Treasure Island

This strikes me not as humor but as allegory. The other UnNews, by Anon, seems like an essay against Islam whose only humor strategy is slight exaggeration; I deleted that one and asked Anon to register and get help to repair it. Spıke Radiomicrophone11:44 12-Apr-16

Uhmm not really an allegory (I couldn't be plainer). I often like to re-write famous stories and turn them current. Oh. I would have kept the anon's news article. I think that had a lot of promise, hence looking for better illustrations. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 12:18, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

It starts with a story, from Pakistan Today, that women's rights are horribly abused in Saudi Arabia, and makes the point that women's rights are horribly abused in Saudi Arabia, mostly adding commentary about that fact. The source is begging for an UnNews, but the actual UnNews has "promise" only if a real comedy theme were breathed into it. Feel free to undelete it if you see how to take it the rest of the way. Spıke Radiomicrophone15:25 12-Apr-16

PS--Nothing at all about the prohibition on playing chess in the kingdom.... Spıke Radiomicrophone15:36 12-Apr-16

I think the article was fine enough. Took me about 20 mins to think of images to illustrate it! May be it has all the problems you mention but it was riffing off a real news story which I doubt we would have covered ourselves. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 16:11, April 12, 2016 (UTC)

All right, it is back as UnNews:Saudi Arabia promotes driver safety. Spıke Radiomicrophone16:54 12-Apr-16

Have renamed yours to simplify the headline a little. It is still problematic, as the main-page reader is not desperate for news on Long John Silver; that is, it isn't clear from the headline what the UnNews is about. Even from the story until one decodes it. Spıke Radiomicrophone17:45 12-Apr-16

PS--The purge bug is back. Spıke Radiomicrophone17:47 12-Apr-16

edit Trump says bruising golf course fight in Scotland prepped him to be U.S. president

Reminds me of an UnNews you wrote some months ago.

Also, a touch-and-go darts match gave him the skills to manage the nuclear arsenal. Spıke Radiomicrophone20:56 12-Apr-16

Maybe he tried out snooker too! --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 07:58, April 13, 2016 (UTC)

edit UnScripts:The West Wing Season 1 Episode 20: The Bridge Between Our Noses

Hey, thanks for noticing my pending script. I took a look at the existing article on The West Wing and I agree it's awfully light. You suggested I create a humor-based article on the TV series. If I decide to do this (which I may not, as I don't know much about the show beyond the first couple of seasons), do you propose I completely rewrite the page and give it a makeover, or that I just edit it to make it a little bit funnier? And by the way, I agree with your observation. I'll add some pictures from the show. Any other counsel is welcome.

Thanks!--Makefolkslaugh ([[User [The user FORMERLY known as Princelogo]:Makefolkslaugh|talk]]) 17:46, April 18, 2016 (UTC)

I watched the entire TV series some time ago. I haven't re-watched it since then so may need a 'refresher'. I think a re-write is possible only if you have decided a 'take' on a particular show. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 06:11, April 19, 2016 (UTC)

edit 2016 Springtime contest judging

Cripes! I see only two contest submissions: User:Chunkles/Lemonade and User:EStop/Boaty McBoatface. We are ready for your verdict. Spıke Radiomicrophone23:52 18-Apr-16

I will check do this Weds. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 06:09, April 19, 2016 (UTC)

edit Donald Trump

Draketo edited the interwiki from this article to the Latin Uncyclopedia. It linked to a redirect and he made it link to the actual article. However, the actual article is three sentences and more insult than humor. Draketo's edit should either be restored or else the interwiki line should be removed entirely. By the way, Draketo also added the interwiki to the Spanish Uncyclopedia. Spıke Radiomicrophone13:22 27-Apr-16

That's fine, I wasn't aware that he had done that. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 12:49, April 28, 2016 (UTC)

edit Khaaaaaaaan!

A Muslim mayor for London? Is it your turn to write an UnNews? Spıke Radiomicrophone09:57 7-May-16

The Wrath of Khan. He's small, looks like George Clooney (silver hair) and his dad was a bus driver. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 14:18, May 7, 2016 (UTC)

edit The Queen in China

I just heard that someone on Chinese social media replied to the Queen's complaint about her recent treatment. "Yes, we're rude, but we're very rich." Who do they think they are, Americans??? Spıke Radiomicrophone14:18 12-May-16

China remembers the Opium Wars. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 14:36, May 12, 2016 (UTC)

edit UnScripts:The West Wing Season 1 Episode 20: The Bridge Between Our Noses

Hey. I've been trying to rewrite this article to appeal to a more general audience, because my original draft was too specific to the TV show I'm parodying. I've run into writer's block. What can I do to help flush out some more ideas?

Thanks!-- Princelogo [The user formerly known as Makefolkslaugh] 22:06, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

I read the article, I thought the best approach was the Martin Sheen/Charlie Sheen angle. The other bit I am not sure about as you would need to know the tv series to get the joke. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 14:08, May 16, 2016 (UTC)

edit VFD

Hi; do you feel like reading more really crappy articles? Shrewvomit at least deserves a push to go where the others went; Vinylrecordprotectress made a good case that the original Skye article should be saved but the knock-offs should go. You said at VFD that Dog seemed featureworthy; if you would do the honors, we can cast shameless self-votes instead of a shameless self-nom. EStop seems to be taking one of those unannounced shore leaves.

Irritable of contents has done yeoman's work at ferreting out awful pages, less so in dropping names from his comic-book world into pages where they don't belong. Also a vandal evidently motivated by my site notice, though the teacher from Ciudad Victoria at whom it was aimed may have gotten the message.

Wolvy was on the site twice nightly about a week ago; not since. And a couple days of smelly Slough just ended with a flurry of new Uncyclopedians writing about Penis and about who is a jerk at the Renaissance School. There is nothing at Reddit to explain it; perhaps there was a call at 4chan for everyone to leave there and spend the evening here. Spıke Radiomicrophone13:45 24-May-16

I have no idea what the Skye article is about! Yes, I have seen I of C has been very active looking for Ye Olde Crappe on this website. I think EStop may be at sea rather than on-line. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 18:15, May 24, 2016 (UTC)

Electric Mocha Chinchilla hurled a couple of insults at you and wishes you died. He posted Campaignpic8.png in 2010. Do you wish to ban him? The preceding unsigned comment was added by Lad Maximillianus (talk • contribs)

No. Life has moved on since 2010. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 19:10, May 30, 2016 (UTC)
There is related conversation on my talk page. Spıke Radiomicrophone19:15 30-May-16
Ok, checked out the comments on your talk page. EMC/HotAdmin 'Forked Off' from this site in 2013. Another reminder why I stayed at 'Spoonville'. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 07:23, May 31, 2016 (UTC)

edit The Mexicans seem to be gone

Do you have an idea for the site notice? Spıke Radiomicrophone11:49 31-May-16

Freemasons! --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 12:23, May 31, 2016 (UTC)

edit FA Autism

Please peruse the history; do I get 1 credit, half credit, or no credit? Spıke Radiomicrophone03:10 4-Jun-16

Hmmm. I don't know and I don't think anyone has established the parameters. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 23:04, June 4, 2016 (UTC)
I'd just claim the point Spike, and hope none of the admins notice.  EStop Easy button 07:28, June 5, 2016 (UTC)

On rereading it, it is built on real-world history left by previous authors but the comedy strategies (diagnosing disobedience, pursuing achievement by filing for various benefits, and analogies to U.S. politics) are all mine. I'll take it. Spıke Radiomicrophone13:06 5-Jun-16

edit Oasis Skin

I tried it, but it killed my patrolling tools which is a pity, probably due to ineptitude with coding though.  EStop Easy button 09:11, June 13, 2016 (UTC)

That's my impression after trying it. Perhaps it's ok for ordinary users but not admins - unless we're all being pretty dense about this stuff! --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 09:16, June 13, 2016 (UTC)
The JavaScript tools such as RollbackAll work by walking through a Special:Contributions listing to find out what to roll back, identifying the elements by their HTML class or ID. AjaxPatrol looks for (patrol) buttons and changes them to make a call elsewhere inside this tool when you click it. A different skin probably changes the HTML that Wikia generates, violating the assumptions of the patrolling tool. Spıke Radiomicrophone12:19 13-Jun-16

edit Noobie of the month

Please close this (and perhaps other awards) out and give Alec Pradeux his due, as Cliffyspatula is authoring a steady stream of fine works and needs Props. Spıke Radiomicrophone04:34 23-Jun-16

Yep, once I remember how I did it before! --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 14:56, June 23, 2016 (UTC)

edit UnScripts:The West Wing Season 1 Episode 20: The Bridge Between Our Noses

Hello! You may remember that a couple of months ago I was working on an UnScript satirizing The West Wing. The feedback I received was that the jokes were too specific to the show and readers who hadn't watched it wouldn't have understood them. I took this to heart and I have been modifying it ever since. I've removed most of the show-specific jokes (but not all, because I still think there should be something to appeal to viewers) and replaced them with jokes that general readers will find funny. I think I've gone as far as I can in refining the article. Any final criticisms or suggestions before I remove the {{Construction}} template? If possible, I would like some feedback specifically on a line I wrote about mens' rights, given by a character named Josh. The point is to ridicule the mens' rights movement who try to seek equality in the wrong issues (as well as to bring a political topic into an article about a political show) but I know it's a big risk that may alienate some readers and seem out of place to others. I'd like your more experienced opinion on this. Thanks! Princelogo [The user formerly known as Makefolkslaugh]

ok, i will have another look. Thanks for the alert. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 20:04, June 25, 2016 (UTC)
I had another look. I can see you have worked a bit more on this article to tie to the present (as of July 2016) and overall, It runs ok. I am just not finding it especially funny, perhaps some amusement from a fan of the show. I think the problem is that if you can could imagine a 'reboot' (though of course, the actor who played Leo has gone). Like Star Trek. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 18:12, July 8, 2016 (UTC)

edit Attention to detail

Thanks Rom, forgot about that bit.  EStop Easy button 12:30, July 30, 2016 (UTC)

If I think you mean the nom template for VFH, that's ok. If it is something else.... --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 07:55, July 31, 2016 (UTC)

It is the VFH template, my apologies and thank you. I'm scatterbrained at the best of times!  EStop Easy button 09:13, July 31, 2016 (UTC)

edit Anarchy

Any feedback for the article would be greatly appreciated. Hope I wont get my aardvarks nose trapped in a vice for moving it to the mainspace. It's been a long time since I did such things.GUN   SIR  MAC  BOSWELL  Knightssword   [†]  20:53, August 3, 2016 (UTC)

OK will do. It looked good enough for mainspace so that's no problem in my view. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 21:29, August 3, 2016 (UTC)

edit UnNews:British police receive upgrade

To meld the topics of robot cops and armed cops, surely Judge Dredd deserves a cameo in this? Spıke Radiomicrophone14:23 4-Aug-16

Perhaps that will be the 'export' model.--LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 14:31, August 4, 2016 (UTC)

edit Aboobacker Amani

https://da.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amani https://ar.wikipedia.org/wiki/أبوبكر_أماني https://ur.wikipedia.org/wiki/ابوبکر_امانی RinalRahman (talk) 09:44, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

He isn't on the English language Wikipedia which is what counts here. Anyway, it wasn't funny either so can go for reason (2). --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 10:02, August 10, 2016 (UTC)


edit Bisto

Surely that should be Bisto Tiberius? GUN   SIR  MAC  BOSWELL  Knightssword   [†]  15:18, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

Why not! :) --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 15:44, August 10, 2016 (UTC)

edit UnNews:Ford building self-woman-driving car

Do you have an idea for how to illustrate this UnNews? Spıke Radiomicrophone19:59 18-Aug-16

Let me think. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 22:17, August 18, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you! That fills the bill exactly! Spıke Radiomicrophone22:58 18-Aug-16

edit Theresa May

I have a little idea I'd like to add to your wonderful article... would you grant me permission sir, I feel it needs some creepiness including? SMBsig08:53, August 22, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, that's fine. No probbo. Just a small point as regards the new sig, can you make it smaller? There was (is?) a rule about a sig's size and length. It's ok on length but I looks a bit big on a talk page. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 13:53, August 22, 2016 (UTC)
Is; it's in UN:SIG. But Mac's signature doesn't violate it. Spıke Radiomicrophone15:10 22-Aug-16
Ok, I wasn't sure. Looks big in Chrome. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 15:27, August 22, 2016 (UTC)
Wider than 55 X's side-by-side? (Ah, but above you said the length was okay.) If it is too high as to force lines apart, that is a problem, but I don't see it at any text zoom in Firefox. Spıke Radiomicrophone15:36 22-Aug-16

Evening Gents, I'll happily make it a little smaller if you like. Just a little bit worried that the bitmap preview wouldn't be legible enough at a smaller size, though I'm keeping in mind the height so it doesn't encroach on text. (I've shrunk it a tad anyway). I think you'll like the truthful additives I have for Theresa May. There's little discussion of her 'extracurricular activities' and she needs to be exposed forthwith! SMBsig20:58, August 22, 2016 (UTC)

Your sig is fine. I checked the Theresa May article but I don't see any new edits. Problem logging in?? --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 07:45, August 23, 2016 (UTC)

I'll be updating it shortly sire. Had the content on another computer. SMBsig08:22, August 23, 2016 (UTC)

Ok had a quick read. I think the extra paragraph somewhat veers off the main article in my view as regards Ken Dodd and Kirsten Dunst story. How do you tie that to Theresa May as such and how 'evil' she is?? --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 10:23, August 23, 2016 (UTC)

It must be said, I did get a bit carried away with the Stroke Me concept, and then Ken Dodd and his disgusting feather duster popped into my mind (which can't be healthy). THEN I realised he's the only old ecentric man left in the UK who hasn't been accused of paedophilia or sexual assault and therefore should be in accordance with popular British standards. I think Dunst popped up because I was reading into her many charity works over the years, she would've suited Stroke Me. Maybe ditch the paragraph completely or replace Dunst with May? I'm sure Dodd would love to get his duster on her. GUN   SIR  MAC  BOSWELL  Knightssword   [†]  13:24, August 23, 2016 (UTC)

I think you can save that bit about Dodd and Dunst for a Ken Dodd Article (if we have one!). I would cut that bit anyway but perhaps something else will come in mind as regards Theresa May and her charities. She does look like someone who could be hiding something very kinky. Perhaps she is Theresa the Dominatrix at number 10, Wisteria Drive. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 15:23, August 23, 2016 (UTC)

I've just taken it out, I think you're right anyway - I just get so carried away it really is quite unbelievable. I'll have a think about her charitable works, see if there's anything floating abround inside my mind. GUN   SIR  MAC  BOSWELL  Knightssword   [†]  08:38, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

Ok, that's fine. I wrote the article quickly to fill out a gap. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 08:43, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

edit Ecce

Now we have Aeitus, Aetius, Aeitius, and some dude named Flavius. Apart from making Uncyclopedia dyslexic-friendly, who are these guys??? Spıke Radiomicrophone15:47 24-Aug-16

Roman spelling (like mine) Declined and Fell. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 16:11, August 24, 2016 (UTC)
And don't forget Anarchus Tacticus! GUN   SIR  MAC  BOSWELL  Knightssword   [†]  21:40, August 24, 2016 (UTC)

edit Marie Antoinette

Despite my vote to feature, this article has a promising Intro full of guillotine puns, but the body takes a sharp drop (oooh!) into Sex Lives of the Royals. It could do with a more clever theme carried throughout. Spıke Radiomicrophone16:52 12-Sep-16

I can't remember if that was the core of the original article. --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 14:59, September 13, 2016 (UTC)

edit Digital advertising

Yikes! Who knew digital advertising agencies were scams, more-or-less like ordinary advertising agencies? Is it the basis for an UnNews? Spıke Radiomicrophone16:56 25-Sep-16

http://www.wsj.com/articles/doubts-about-digital-ads-rise-over-new-revelations-1474674323

Not sure, isn't all advertising a scam essentially? Except we are willing to be 'scammed'?? --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 08:43, September 26, 2016 (UTC)

edit Uncyclopedia:VFH/HowTo:Get super powers

With apologies, I reverted your double scorefix here, because you never cast an actual ballot. Without prejudice if you wish to do so now.... Spıke Radiomicrophone02:09 30-Sep-16

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