Oh yays you're sort of whoring something of mine to myself. I feel immensely satisfied. Also do you see that little request on that article's VFH? It's at the bottom in bold... Do you think you could do that, if it does get featured and I'm away? - [07:46 8 July] SirFStDonYettie
Oh and I've got to go soon...but there's something that's been bugging me, do you mind if I quickly clear up your sig? - [07:47 8 July] SirFStDonYettie
I express my sincerest and humblest sympathy to the boat and any other non-Orian bits that may have been involved. For now I must say "adios!" as I'm off to..... Newcastle! - [08:06 8 July] SirFStDonYettie
Hey Whats up. Anything new? Founding Member Baseball16 00:50, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
Can't say that much is new. Other than this header I created for a different topic. Although I did change my sig. Thought it was time for something simpler, you like? your's is, er, interesting. you do know that you can just create another sub page when you want to change you sig (something like "User:baseball16/sig2"). If you don't, and you didn't, it changes your sig in every past place you put it too. Oh and my talk page and userpage are both quite new aswell. Also, that shape I gave you may not have 16 sides at all I was told that my one, which I thought was 57 sided, is only 32 sided (12 pentagonal, 20 hexagonal) with 90 edges and 60 vertices, so nothing even remotely 57 related. And now I'm placing it in my head I think yours is only 10 or maybe even 8. Meh, doesn't matter really. But yeah, that's me what's new in Baseball land? I've tried to keep an eye out and that but you seem to be doing your own thing. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 07:33 10 July 2008
I have joined the Uncyclopedian Anarchist Party. Click on the Great Head in my sig to see and join(if you want) also I have a question? Is there a place that I can request to get my User Page designed? Founding Member Baseball16 18:28, 10 July 2008 (UTC)
I shall have a look in a bit. And not really, it's sorta something you just do yourself. Steal code from other users pages and build it up like that. That's what I did anyway. For example these back grounds I stole from Yettie and and the Talk page rules box I stole from Hv. I'll try and help you if you give me an idea of what you want but I can't make any promises. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:36 10 July 2008
I CAN HAZ HELP POPULAR AMERICAN SPORT? I'm happy to help you with a userpage. *splurt* - [18:39 10 July] SirFStDonYettie
SPLURT!!! On my talk page! Clean that up now or it'll stain! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:41 10 July 2008
*Shrugs* I dunno. I read a chapter of his archives every night before I go to bed, I'm just supposing he does the same. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 20:39 10 July 2008
Jeesus Christ In High Heaven, you do? I better clear that place up then...oh wait, it's for you...maybe not. Also, Baseball, so you vanna me to help you with your userpage? Okay but I'm going away on Saturday and tomorrow is a full day of real life, peeing and admiring myself in mirrors. I'll see if I can lend you a hand tomorrow. Actually, I better write a to-do list. - [21:04 10 July] SirFStDonYettie
Yeh...hi Orian57. Sorry, I've been really lazy and can't be bothered with the whole template thing. Well actually, this is a template...I'm just substing it in. It's just as generic and unpersonalised as a template, so don't worry about that! Anyway thanks and all for voting for this. Erm, yeh...it's on the frontpage! Woo! Also I created a tribute to it after some talks with Hypeybole. Anyway, thanks again, Orian57!- [08:44 10 July] SirFStDonYettie
Yeah I know all about the tribute. I 'came across' it in recent changes... You dirty people. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 08:57 10 July 2008
JESUS CHRIST, IN YOUR INFINITE WISDOM AND SEXUAL ACCOMPLISHMENT ON HIGH IN HEAVEN NEXT TO GOD: OH LORDY! The title... - [18:04 10 July] SirFStDonYettie
OH JESUS ON HIGH, THE PAGE TITLE! JESUS ON HIGH! I need to start writing my article "Smoking Weed With Jesus". - [18:08 10 July] SirFStDonYettie
What about the title? You not like? I thought it was a good way of whoreing everything. whithout my sig being gigantic or useing that sig-expand thing I've grown to dislike. Are you serious about that article title? It sounds intriguing if a little cleche. Congratulations on your second feature by the way. I'm working on something that I hope will wow people, need loads of work though I've bassically got the bones right now. Also yays your back! Yays! Also you read my new blog through yet??? Like to know what you think. Also do you know of any good hair gels? I can't find any good ones and can't afford to keep looking! Ok done my ramble. you may speak. SPEAK NOW CHILD! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:18 10 July 2008
Sowee... Please speak to me... I didn't mean to shout. You know mummy loves you. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:29 10 July 2008
No, the title's fine, it was just very....dramatic. Yes I'm slightly serious about that title, one of the many ideas floating around my floating-space-idea-carboard-box. And I've seen that thing you're writing; it is starting to look very good. I have read your blod, I think, but I don't really have many opinions! Sorry, I'm not being that helpful! It was good, though. - [07:47 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
this one just make sure. I've put this title in all my sub pages as well. I don't think it's that dramatic. This new article sounds interesting like I said, look forward to reading it. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 10:06 11 July 2008
Sure! Are you gonna reply to the above message, I didn't write that ramble for nothing you know. And seriously what you think of my title header thing? And my new story blog? SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 23:24 10 July 2008
Hmm...okay I'll reply, but I've decided to only edit this section so I'll go back and reply to that. Also you're now standing for a position in the senate. - [07:45 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
That sounds political. What exactly do I have to do? Stand and wave, make mawkishly sentimental speaches about the importance of family and then sleep with underage rent boys? Cos I should warn you I'm not much of a public speaker. And cameras set of my epilepsy. And I'm not married so no one'll care about the rent boy thing... SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 10:10 11 July 2008
Jeese a conversation in two places! I can't deal with this! I'm just going to talk here, see how you like that! Christians will care about the rent boy thing, surely you don't live in sin by having intercourse out of wedlock? You just need to get people to vote for you: althought no one's allowed t ovote until there's enough candidates. I have read that story blog...The one with the action sutff...and the rape and stuff? Now for a word: Poopy. - [12:38 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
Eww, poop. And he never got raped. What did you think of it though? You seem a little reserved, if it was bad just say sorry to nag but I like getting feedback. And no sin for me, we just lie in bed and talk... Ok we're naked -- but motel rooms can get pretty stuffy. We just talk. No sin at all. Nope. None for me. talking of sin...SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 12:48 11 July 2008
I'm not being reserved! I'm never reserved. Look how unreserved I am! It's good! I haven't got many specific views - I'm feeling a tiny bit viewless at the moment. Also, maybe I should nom you for sysop-ness... Er :-) - [12:53 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
AGH! Ok no need to shout! Thanks for offering but I really don't think I'd be any good ad being a sysop: still don't quite have a handle on somethings and would rather not be commited like that. Maybe in a few months. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 13:06 11 July 2008
That's more like it. Good. Are you OK, by the way? you seem kinda... UnOK? what with the typos and viewlessness. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 13:30 11 July 2008
Typos? I made typos? That's pretty bad, but nah I'm fine...good, actually! Very good, I'm struggling with my attempt at an UnTunes a bit...Ermmm... *cough* - [13:38 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
Tupos areeen't BaDD! It's just you don't normally make them. But if your fine that's good to hear! And an UnTunes? sounds interesting, you gonna sing it too? SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 13:43 11 July 2008
Please...sing it! Pah, I'm awful at musically things (apart from writing the song, I hope...). I'm just listening to a few various songs, and then I'm gonna basically just rewrite the lyrics. I started an original song, but it got a bit complicated, especially if I wanted someone else to sing it. I was actually rather hoping Hypeybole would do the audio, if he had time, I heard two of his and they were great. - [13:49 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
It's much harder to parody lyrics than you might think at first, cos it has to stick to the same beat as the song, even if you use different rymes. It's bassically poetry and it's hard to write. What songs are you thinking of parodying? and what are you planning to make them about? Remember I tried to do a song once. Abandoned it pretty quickly. Though I did finish 1984 one of my favorit books! Oh and yeah, Hypes audios are amazing! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 13:56 11 July 2008
Well I wanted to write something from experience - so I was gonna right a song about stalking. It's a bit old, but I quite like the topic - at the moment. Also somewhere on my ideas list was to write a song related to one of my articles/to whore something of mine. For the momment I'm playing with big songs - like Rockstar, some of Mr. Blunt's terribly annoying songs, even Abba songs and Queen songs. Just sort playing around - seeing what works. - [14:07 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
Queen, James Blunt, ABBA -- Yettie your music collection is gayer than mine. Stalking I can do. The same deluded fantasy about the same guy for a year, finding out where he lives and arranging accidental meetings in the local shop when he buys his morning paper on his way to work. Just ask if you need ideas. Though I do agree it may be a little tierd, Weird Al does stalking songs at least once on each of his albums. For Rockstar what would be your wanna-be-occupation? Clean-er? Or no! Porn-star! taht way you can introdsuce ides like the dark side of porn, STD's, utter lonlieness and eventally being snuffed sorry I watched a documentary... SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 14:54 11 July 2008
Ahem, that's not my music collection! I generally don't pick good songs to attempt to rewrite. Also they're generally upbeat those songs, which I thought would be interesting with a song about stalking. A while ago I had the thought to rewrite Rockstar to be for an illegal immigrant or illegal worker. However I stopped when things started to seem like they were getting a little not-PC. I didn't want to be hunted down and shot, again. - [15:00 11 July] SirFStDonYettie
Not PC is good. Usually. Fine line between racist and not PC but if you can pull stuff like that off it can be really funny. Upbeat and about stalking may clash. Another idea is putting the plot to a movie or book to music. But making the plot seem simple and thin or using it to parody the original song. Like having a really gentle sickly type of song talking about the Hostel movie(s). Or a simple repetitive song talking about something complicated like The Beach (I love that movie, Decaprio is topless for 90% of it and it's got a brilliant story) or Donnie Darko. cos there contrast will work really well. Or another idea I just came up with, have you ever heard the song "American Jesus" by Bad Religion? Well you could flip that to be something like the "British Dawkins". Maybe not. Just tossing ideas around carelesly again. Oh shit sorry one knocked your Jesus ornament off the mantel again. Sorry, Sorry! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 15:22 11 July 2008
Look at you, sitting there all high and mighty with your Chuck Norris facts and Oscar Wilde quotes, well during this season of laziness and sitting round jacking off, please donate the gift of humor (or humour, we bend that way to no matter how much we are chased out of church) to a poor Uncyclopedian run newspaper near you. Take this poor little article for example; Canadian Tire Money or Canny as no-one calls him, just 8 minutes old and he is already roaming the streets. Illiterate and doing incoherency, long lines of lists and e before i (especially after c), it is only a matter of time before he turns to gay jokes to fund his addictions. Please help this little article achieve its potential as an Injoke by donating the gift of laughter, stupidity... or even just simple bad taste.
Free publicity in exchange for; 1) Shitty memes 2) Dragging up shitty memes ~ Euroipods
There's more you can do...
Call you're nearest admin and start a discussion about just how much humor you can donate (read: swearing and shock-porn), or start the 2717231278th forum topic concerning how we all must strive to remove the scourge of shitty articles. In the immortally misattributed words of our founding fathers, stillwaters and Chronarion"Fuck were we high" er... or words of respected member TheLedBalloon "Also, in the ass or the mouth?" oh dear... or even words of respectedmember 188.8.131.52 "Hey look a donut". Amen. Our lines are open to your pledges 25/7.
This past month of June, the Uncyclopedia community got its first chance at VFS since February, and one new op was decided upon. While there were many great and very capable candidates, one in particular got the most attention and the most votes. Modusoperandi. This long time Uncyclopedian has been to VFS almost every time it gets opened as far as we can trace, and always misses it in the final round by a slim number of votes. However, this month turned out to be a winner for him, so congratulations Modus. MO likes to spend his time writing things and 'chopping some images, but also finds time to goof off in the forums, and relieve the everyday pressure of his fellow colleagues with his off topic sense of humor, which he rarely hides. Modus has a total of 19.5 featured articles as well as 10 featured images. We at UnSignpost congratulate Modus on his winnings, and are willing to put $10 on him becoming the next STM.
Yeah, the UnSignpost, the newspaper that Uncyclopedia would totally fall apart without, took a wikibreak last week. They seem to be fashionable, so we thought we'd find out what they were all about. They seem to involve time spent not hunched over a keyboard in a darkened room. The UnSignpost reminds you that such activities are hazardous to your health, and should be avoided at all costs. (Note: this is absolutely true - in no way did the UnSignpost just miss a week because no-one could be bothered to edit it, or anything)
19:56, 30 June 2008 Olipro (Talk | contribs) blocked Codeine (Talk | contribs) with an expiry time of a sloppy wet blowjob
19:42, 30 June 2008 Codeine (Talk | contribs) changed group membership for Modusoperandi from (none) to sysop (I asked on IRC for a funny reason tto put here, and no-one could come up with one. Losers.)
22:39, 30 June 2008 Codeine (Talk | contribs) blocked 184.108.40.206 (Talk) with an expiry time of 1 week (Blanking articles will not compensate for your small penis))
(Block log); 18:54 . . Codeine (Talk | contribs) (blocked 220.127.116.11 with an expiry time of 1 week: No, Pete Doherty is a talentless junkie cunt. Deal with it.)
(Huff log); 18:21 . . Modusoperandi (Talk | contribs) (huffed "Hate Crew official fan club": Shock to the page/and you're to blame/baby, you give stubs/a bad name)
(Huff log); 20:12 . . Mordillo (Talk | contribs) (huffed "Cabal/Cabal9": content was: 'there is a cabal' (and the only contributor was located and executed by the cabal. There is no cabal)
(Block log); 22:30 . . Mhaille (Talk | contribs) (blocked User:Revel4tion with an expiry time of infinite: and on the eight day he fucked off)
10:58, 8 July 2008 Modusoperandi (Talk | contribs) blocked 18.104.22.168 (Talk) with an expiry time of 2 hours (You partly piss me off. The rest of me is in love. I'm torn. Come back later. I hate you. I love you!)
Biopic of the Week
MrN9000 ~ One of the more "seasoned" users on Uncyc, at a sprightly 360 years old, MrN was bitten by a pair of radioactive Y-fronts in his youth, bestowing upon him the awesome power of pants. Fortunately for us here at Uncyc, he decided to use those powers for good, and he is now our reigning king of poop, featuredauthor and amateur tap dancer (hea, a man can have more than one hobby!)
<Codeine> here's a thought
<Codeine> If you download music, supposedly you're damaging the music industry
<Codeine> if you download childporn, you're *supporting* the childporn industry
<Codeine> I'M GETTING MIXED SIGNALS
<Ljlego> moral of the story:
<Ljlego> childporn is the way to go
<Run-DLL> thanks for the moral go-ahead
Crappy deleted Stub of the Week
"this chocolate is blue. and it has a BIG GREEN PENIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#" - From Blue chocolate
Reason to take a Wikibreak of the Week (Admin Special)
"You dream that you're being deopped after being called "The Bloody Admin" (as in that one whose hands are drenched in user's blood). Yes. Yes." - Mordillo
Just sayin' ta for the review. I've already tried to implement some of the suggestions you said – it already seems better, but I'm glad you liked it, even if you did score insanely generously on images (I would have given myself a 3!). Congrats on 50 reviews as well. I noticed that I was sandwiched between two 38.25 features – that's slightly annoying. Thanks! ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][12/07 10:54]
Wasn't a problem! I would have got it done sooner it's just some evil alien shit was going down and I met this strange man, who calls himself The Doctor, and he saved everybody and took me traveling around time and space in his TARDIS. /end lazy excuse. As for my scoring... Like I said they were ok but not side-splitting. I guess if your being really harsh I coulda given images a 6 but it's the comments that matter. Also thanks for picking up my article! It's been there hours! And yay! Now I can spell sequitur! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 12:41 12 July 2008
Fair enough - I'm probably just a harsh scorer myself. I'm probably going to get a second review, since, well, I like getting two reviews on all my articles, but only after I've finished the modifications, which I like the look of. I've never actually been all that good at images really, but meh. Although I'm tempted to do what you did, your review should be done later tonight, and if not, tomorrow. ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][12/07 12:46]
Yeah I like second reviews, gives a better idea of how it's actually going. And take as long as you need! Well actually don't, I was just being polite. I'll sit chewing my nails down to the bone untill I have someones opinion. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 12:59 12 July 2008
Why?:Would I ever put myself through anything like that again? I might though, if it's for you. at least you'll listen. I mean I may aswell have presented my review to a stone gerbil, in fact it may have done more to save the article. though I'm still kinda proud of that review (it could have been better I just got fed up with repeating myself) It's kinda part of uncyc culture now. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:13 12 July 2008
That's not a bad article idea actually... /me steals it. Well, PEEING culture at least. It won't be done for ages though, so you don't have to worry! I'm still kinda concentrating on M.J, and of the lot I have at my itinerary page it'll hopefully be the last one I write. I'm done with your improvements on it now, so thanks. As for your review, I've done images and concept so far, it'll be done for about 10pm. ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][12/07 18:17]
But it's my idea! Well I just put it on my list, there's other stuff I have a better idea of what to do with though, so you can have it. Possibly we could collab on it sometime? and coolies. I may stay up for that. Oh and Mr Judge is looking good now! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:31 12 July 2008
Yeah, a collab sounds good - later though, I too have some other ideas. And thanks! Though I'm going for the second review before doing anything else. ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][12/07 18:34]
Yeah, good luck with it! And yes later for a collab as I need to finish stuff. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:48 12 July 2008
I think I might do a different collab with him anyway. if you look in the above conversation he's thinking of an UnTune. But you're right we can't let him steal our glory. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:58 12 July 2008
Yuh, thanks for the review. I'll return with proper thanks and a template and stuff during the week when I have time, this is a very quick visit and I think I'm already later for something! Looks like you're due more than one template too - all will be sorted when I have time. But for now, I must away! Adios and have a blinding rest of the weekend. /me vaults over the wall, lands on handy horse, expertly makes it rear majestically for a second, then disappears in a cloud of dust, swearing and hat-falling-off. --UU - natter08:23, Jul 13
Who was that masked user? MrNFork you! 08:25, Jul 13
I dunno but he was handsome! *swoons* SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 12:09 13 July 2008
This user is a complete sucker for punishment, and has now completed over 50 pee reviews. Awesome! –Hv
For 50 reviews. Keep it up! (Dammit, you'll be second before you know it). ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][13/07 09:26]
Yay! Another SFP Ninjastar! I must actually be a sucker for punishment! *Goes away to re-fashion life as such* SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 12:18 13 July 2008
And while I'm dishing these out...
Platinum Pisser Rejoice! Your colossal achievement of completing over 50 in-depthpee reviews has been recognised with the provision of this luxury micturitional accessory. You will be the envy of your friends. Or you would be, if you hadn't ignored them for ages while you were reviewing.
Feel proud. I never actually got one of these, so you're in elite company with UU and Sissy. 'Grats! ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][13/07 19:28]
How come you never got one? You've got 50 In-depth and the rules clearly say you deserve one. I'd give you it but I'm not sure I'm qualified. Also Yay! Yay! Yay! I've never been so exited in my life! Just need to do 3 more to be ahead of you and then I'm second! then I need to beet U.U.! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:33 13 July 2008
MDL checked my fiftieth, and I'm not sure if he was aware of the things...meh. You'll probably pass me and Sissy, but UU is a huge challenge methinks. Just try as hard as you can before the RotM curse kicks in! ~~Heeren["Meh"][tecħ][kurk][13/07 19:36]
Christ my internet is running slow! You replied before my page had refreshed! What curse? SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:39 13 July 2008
Everyone who's won RotM has had something happen to them the month after:
OEJ: Went AWOL for several months.
Cajek: Went AWOL for even longer.
MrN9000: Has done like 2 or 3 reviews a month since.
Right, I'm starting a Vote Java campaign [sp?]! Though it won't make any difference to me, I have nothing better to do in life. Although I should get a job... SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:50 13 July 2008
Hmm, it seems that Hv's given you two of the templates I was planning to arrive with today. However, you still deserve this last one for a top-notch review. Oh, and if you overtake my actual total (and not just the ones I've done since Cajek started the list), I'll prepare and present you a special template all of your very own. Just 70-odd to go (and I may find the time to do one or two more myself!) --UU - natter10:03, Jul 14
I award you an under-used Ninjastar. Rust may have dulled its cutting edge, but it is still a potent symbol. Yes. –UU.
I put my article The Fat Girl up for a pee review. User:Syndrome reviewed it, and the review didn't go well for me. Not that I'm looking for rose petals at my feet, but the review, aside from a few handy suggestions, came off in a backhanded way. Well, at least I took it that way - Syndrome said that it was meant to be self depricating, and I have to take their word for that. Since you seem to be Pee Reviewer Extraordinarie of the moment, could you take a look at the Pee Review and tell me if you think I'm nuts? Dame GUNPotYWotM2xPotM17xVFHVFPPooPMS•YAP• 20:04, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
Yeah Actually I noticed this review and his talk page. I actually read the review the was Sydrome said he intended it, he was possibly being a little facietious sometimes and maybe a little vague [sp?] but from what I could tell he did do it in good faith. If you'd like I'd happily pee the article myself (just start a new request), I've read it and I think I understood it better (although I don't have a fat girl =[ ). Oh and congrats on the feature! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 20:54 13 July 2008
Thanks for the offer. But I think I need to make some changes before I put it back up. Is it perfect? No. At the same time, I know better than to Pee Review an article on gaming when I know nothing about gaming, you know what I mean? Dame GUNPotYWotM2xPotM17xVFHVFPPooPMS•YAP• 22:40, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
Yeah I get what your saying. Also sure make some changes! And thanks for the vote! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 02:53 14 July 2008
Coolies, I'll get right on it! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 18:19 14 July 2008
I had to root about and fix my removal of the first pee review, so now its on as a resubmit. What does that mean? Well I put your template on it, so you'll have to go a hunting. Hugs, Dame GUNPotYWotM2xPotM17xVFHVFPPooPMS•YAP•
Now he's really confused I'm sure... We did however know that already... MrNFork you! 18:50, Jul 14
Yes I am. Why are there breasts on my talk page! I'd prefer if you put them away in future. Also yes I think I know what's happenening and it's cool, I'll get the review done as soon as I can, Pretty, might be tomorrow though. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:05 14 July 2008
What breasts? There are no breasts here. Are you are seeing breasts all over the place Orian? Maybe that's telling you something eh? MrNFork you! 19:17, Jul 14
/questions sexuality... yeah your right. I was wrong: Heterosexuality is the way forward after all! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:25 14 July 2008
Now you are just being an ass. If you're not careful, I will put you over my knee and spank you. Oh. Dam. MrNFork you! 19:28, Jul 14
/Questions sexuality again...SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:30 14 July 2008
The bit about there being no pay-off to the build-up about the guy getting up to some bad shit in his room. For me, the joke was the level of spying the narrator is indulging in is far worse than anything he's actually seen the guy doing, so I thought that was a subtle pay-off. I have, however, pumped that up a little more, hoping that the narrator going to further extremes will add the funny.
To answer your question, jaywalking is crossing the road outside of designated areas (such as traffic lights). In some jurisdictions of the US, this is a criminal offense, and can lead to up to a week in jail. Hardcore criminal activity, therefore! (And that explains my use of "more extreme" sins - as against most extreme - "more extreme" being a perfectly acceptable phrase, so I won't be changing that, thanks all the same!)
Also, the quote was there before I got there, and I suspect it is actually a direct quote from somewhere. Also, I think that being warm for the rest of his life is good (it implies the rest of his life will be quite short) as opposed to "all eternity", as that kind of implies he's going to hell, I suspect, which may not be the case (being set on fire not being a sin as far as I've heard).
"Repent of your sins" is a good, old-fashioned English phrase, and is actually more correct than "repent your sins".
The repetition - guilty as charged, thanks for pointing it out!
The other points - thanks, but I'll keep them as they are (either they're correct in the context intended, or I prefer them that way).
So yeah, thanks for the review, I've made appropriate tweaks and changes, can you have another glance and see if you think it's improved? If you think it's ready for VFH, well, that's your call - I've never been comfortable nomming my own stuff. --UU - natter10:44, Jul 14
There are places where it's illegal to cross a road? That's insane! As for teh rest *Shrugs* Well you know "my opinion" and all that, maybe I'm just too young to remember this archaic language and it just didn't sound right. As for VFH I think I will. Also cool Ninjastar! Yay! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 15:18 14 July 2008
Actually, in Britain, it's technically illegal to cross a motorway. But I don't know what the punishment for it is - possibly a policeman comes and looks at you really sternly. --UU - natter15:39, Jul 14
Oh well I figured playing chicken on a motorway was pretty dangerous but I actually didn't know it was illegal. Learn something new everyday I guess... / me goes to play chicken on a motor waySKSirOrian57Talk RotM 15:53 14 July 2008
I noticed that you have just put you PEE stamp on Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Fat Girl. I had a word with Prettiestpretty about this review, and we agreed to revert her revert back to Syndrome's review to keep the review on the current page. I did not want to do that myself as I suspect that you are reviewing it yourself now. Would ya do me a favour please and either copy Syndrome's review onto the current page (above the one you did) or maybe create a new review for Prettiestpretty with the (Resubmit) convention which we normally use and put your new review there? Like yourself, I'm sure Syndrome wants to keep his reviews current... Enjoy. Oh, looks like you are doing really well in reviewer of the month... ;-) MrNFork you! 18:43, Jul 14
Forget all that stuff then... MrNFork you! 19:18, Jul 14
You neede to get better at it. What's the point of having adoptess if you don't get them to vote for you at every possible opportunity in return? Politics, dear boy, policits... Rt Hon W E Gladstone MP GOM | Converse | 19:35, 15 July 2008 (UTC)
I got baseball and Nacky to. But then I thought was bad parenting: I want you to have your own minds and all that pretentious stuff. In all honesty I just forgot to mention it. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:38 15 July 2008
It's more typos than spelling. But if you want you can proof read my talk page. And the archives. Incidentally I notice that Capital "T"... Anyways have fun, and be sure to call round if you need help. Don't talk to strangers! Unless they're cute strangers, in which case knock yourself out! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 19:44 15 July 2008
Yeah sorry about that, it's my canabilism (I'm working on it! C(anibals)A(nnonymous) and all that), make sure to get a tetnus shot and anti-biotics. Also tidles! (~~~~) Put four after your message! SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 01:39 19 July 2008
/me eats Orian. Woops, now that could cum out the wrong way... MrNFork you! 01:50, Jul 19
/me tells my mommy there's a man saying strange things to me on the internetSKSirOrian57Talk RotM 01:54 19 July 2008
Do I sound British? I really hope I do! Ummm, RAHB got finished with the audio on Awkward Conversation. You had said earlier that you would VFH it when it was done, and I think I'm done with it. If you want to, that would be cool. If not, no worries. The Woodburninator (woodtalk) (woodstalk) 06:16, 19 July 2008 (UTC)
No you sound 19th centuary English and there's a subtle difference. And yup. Though if I was being really picky I'd say get an elevator pic. But I'm not being really -- or even slightly -- picky at the minute. Give me a sec and I'll sort out the nom. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 16:16 19 July 2008
I do like the Fat Girl Super hero, but you prove a point that she doesn't seem intergrated into the text, so I think that she will have to get a section, or a bullet in the list that you seem to like textually, but dislike because its a list. The Queen Mum image is O-U-T, there seems to be an agreement that it just doesn't work, at all and I am part of that agreement.
As for the words that you learned, well there you go! I've learned a lot from borther and his "mens". My kids have a vocabulary that is unbeliveable. Our eldest daughter was playing dress-up and "modeling" last month and when her father asked what she was doing she replied "I am FIERCE!" and then she tried to snap her fingers. She's been spending way too much time Skyping with her uncle - thank God he hasn't taught her the words to "CUNTY". He made me watch the video on You Tube and I couldn't get it out of my head for months. I also have learned from my nephew - he's a member of the club, too.
Yeah, wow, glad to see people taking my advice (more often than not it gets ignored and then the article gets huffed) yeah lists I think just dont look erm... fierce (?) enough, Prose always looks less... Cunty (?) (and generally keeps a tone better). And yeah like I said it was mostly just the images that were off. When they're sorted it's likly go to VFH. SKSirOrian57Talk RotM 06:23 20 July 2008
Uncyclopedia's twice annual writing competition, the Poo Lit Surprise starts this week. In typical Uncyclopedia style, it seems to have come as a surprise to many, not least EMC, who was supposed to be running it, but who has disappeared without trace.
Horrified by what was happening to their beloved and prestigious competition, the Uncyclopedia community rushed into action as soon as it noticed (a day or so late), and promptly agreed someone needed to do something.
This was followed by some of the community running around in small circles, flapping their hands wildly and panicking a bit, before cuddly authority figure Zombiebaron decisively stepped in and selflessly told Dr. Skullthumper to sort it out and get the fuck on with it.
At the time of going to press, both Skullthumper and Zombiebaron may have been available for comment for all we know, but we couldn't be bothered to ask them.
VFS: The Race Hots Up For The Second Month Running
The race is turning out to be quite a close one between several of the frontrunners, so the ever-impartial UnSignpost (founded by Cajek and Dr. Skullthumper) brings you pen pics of the current favourites.
Heerenveen - Uncyclopedia's Tank. Doesn't sleep, eat, dream or pet fluffy animals. Does nothing, in fact, but patrol Special:Recentchanges, rolling over cyberbullying, shooting down crap, smoking out vandals and reverting their stuff, and other tank-like activities. What to expect: extreme diligence, and a bigger gun, apparently.
MrN9000 - Profiled in the Unsignpost only last week, MrN has still found time to become even more awesome than he was then, and mends, mentors and poopsmiths his way around the site with matchless dedication. What to expect: zero tolerance for anything pants.
Roman Dog Bird - Frankie is another tireless worker in the name of making crap stuff less crap, good stuff betterer, and shite stuff deleted. Wherever there is a thankless task to be done on the wiki, you shall find him. Which is a good job, because we have no intention of thanking him. What to expect: him to be ready from day one (hmm, that's a catchy slogan...)
Dr. Skullthumper - A true legend of Uncyclopedia: handsome, talented, possessed of unprecedented levels of awesome, and a genius towards whom this newspaper (that he co-founded) is not in the least bit biased. Oh no. And can he give the editorial staff their teddies back now, please? What to expect: benevolent dictatorship with an iron fist. In a good way.
RAHB - What comes to mind when you hear the name RAHB? Is it VFD? QVFD? QTVFD? RecentChanges? All those answers are correct and more when you get the new and improved RAHB this month! RAHB is an Uncyclopedia policy wonk with all the credentials of Al Gore, except for that Vice-President thing. What to expect: former audio superstar turned into a big, friendly admin. In a good way!
Who will win? All may be reported in future editions of the UnSignpost. If we remember. And if we can be bothered.
17:49, 11 July 2008 Olipro (Talk | contribs) blocked 22.214.171.124 (Talk) with an expiry time of 1 week (This is a penis, this is you)
18:29, 11 July 2008 Mordillo (Talk | contribs) blocked 126.96.36.199 (Talk) with an expiry time of 1 week (This ban is approved by the society of Chuck Norris followers. Chuck, for a better world )
23:37, 13 July 2008 Spang (Talk | contribs) blocked Jimbo spends foundation money in russian prostitutes (Talk | contribs) with an expiry time of infinite (IN them?)
08:31, 17 July 2008 Mordillo (Talk | contribs) blocked 188.8.131.52 (Talk) with an expiry time of infinite (If there something I really detest is IPs with small penii trying to act like big honchos on a wiki web site. I'd like to meet you one day, Mr. IP, and send you over the IP hospital)
Biopic of the Week
Hyperbole ~ Hype is awesome! Hype has been on Uncyc for just a short time, and yet has already written some of the greatestarticlesevercomposed by human beings! Hype is easily the greatest author ever to have graced this humble wiki, and it is surely only a matter of time before he sails past Ljlego's record of 76 features with consummate ease. And despite not having either the Democrat or Republican nomination, Hype is also the surest bet in this year's Presidential elections! Is there anything this guy can't do? Apart from that thing with the rosary and the 3 Mexican children?
Comeback of the Week
Gerrycheevers ~ For the third or fourth time this year, Uncyc's comeback kid has again popped through his revolving catflap to grace us with his presence after a period of absence! The UnSignpost staff are accepting bets as to how long this comeback will last. Any takers?
Plea of the Week
Hey you! Yes you! You're reading this, so you must have some free time you don't know what to do with, so why not write an article for the UnSignpost! As you can tell from reading this very issue, actual writing talent is not required, just spout some gubbins about something that's happened on the wiki during the last week, and as long as it's not too likely to start drama, we'll probably stick it in! How can you refuse? Go on, be your friend?