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RE: Final Girl

Hey Orion! Thankyou for reviewing my article, Final Girl. I didn't write it in my account because I hadn't signed in, lol. I will revise it as you have asked, and thanks. Youve been really helpful. -Blammo77 00:33, 21 June 2008 (UTC)

You're very welcome. Also when talking on people's talk page be sure to leave a heading (as I have just put in) so it keeps with normal formatting and observe other formatting rituals like indenting with colons (:) (unless it's the first post under the header) you indent with one more colon than the previous speaker (unless the indenting is getting ridiculous then it sometimes becomes one less). Yeah if you ever need help with stuff you can come ask me, if you want I could officially adopt you, and yeah good luck with the article I thought it was a good one! Have Fun!MuCal. Orian57 Orian57Talk!Read!PEE!UnProvise!CMC! 00:42 21 June 2008
Oh and seriously its Orian. A remember. Have Fun!MuCal. Orian57 Orian57Talk!Read!PEE!UnProvise!CMC! 00:42 21 June 2008

UnSignpost: June 19th, 2008

THEDUDEBOT Armed and Ready Say The Word 01:03, 21 June 2008 (UTC)

UnProvise!

Hey Orian! I'm trying to inspire more use of UnProvise with this ThingieProvise (he he he...thingie). Feel like joining in? Just think of a really famous character and join, I guess. If we can get this one UnProvise to do really well, we might kickstart the whole thing a bit. - [13:26 22 June] Sir FSt. Don Pleb Yettie (talk) QotF BFF NotM RotM UNPotM UGotM CUN PEE SR UnProvise

Yeah! I noticed it last night but was too tierd to read it I shall get round to it soon though. Looks like a good idea! Have Fun!MuCal. Orian57 Orian57Talk!Read!PEE!UnProvise!CMC! 13:28 22 June 2008

Review

Yeah, your tag has been on this for, by your standards, an ice age. Are you still planning to do it? Because if not, I'm gonna go close the request until the guy has done any work on it to justify getting a review. --UU - natter UU Manhole 10:44, Jun 23

Oh yeah sorry, I'd forgotten about that. Yeah, yeah go close it, got a feeling he's abandoned it as well. Need to do that other review I've tagged too. It's just I wrote something and am now working on it with the review I got from Yettie (fucking awsome review too). Like the new sig as well! Have Fun!MuCal. Orian57 Orian57Talk!Read!PEE!UnProvise!CMC!

UnSignpost: June 26nd, 2008

THEDUDEBOT Armed and Ready Say The Word 22:41, 27 June 2008 (UTC)

Lyke todally OMG that isn't {{USERNAME}} in that newspapper! I've been recognised! And now, back to masturbation. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 07:50 29 June 2008

*mutters* You dirty man. - [09:01 29 June] Sir FSt. Don Pleb Yettie (talk) QotF BFF NotM RotM UNPotM UGotM CUN PEE SR UnProvise
Oh I suppose you're whiter than white then? You were mentioned too, though not as much. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 09:33 29 June 2008
Yes I'm whiter than white, even if I'm slightly blue. Also, I think you'll find I was mentioned more as I was first...even though I come last alphabetically...apart from Qua...but I guess Qua doesn't really count anymore...blah blah blah. I can't see anymore, I've just spent the last ten hours finishing Call of Duty...how sad am I? Very,very,very SAD - [11:38 29 June] Sir FSt. Don Pleb Yettie (talk) QotF BFF NotM RotM UNPotM UGotM CUN PEE SR UnProvise
Hi, again. - Sir FSt. Yettie (talk) (>>) [20:52 29 June]
Ok... yeah I guess Qua doesn't count anymore. Shame, he seemed alright and I was in the middle of an unprovise with him (though he wasn't playing fair; blowing up my library), might finish that one up actually... Definitly is more that could be done with a ninja librarian. Oh and yeah, don't do it and stuff. I care.
Good...but have you actually read the forum I linked there, huh? Can you even read? Pah! - Sir FSt. Yettie (talk) (>>) [06:28 30 June]
Yes I can read, and I have and yeah, I see what your saying. I'm just not sure if I have anything to add other than Penis. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 08:06 30 June 2008

hi

y halo thar sirIgnignokt.gifsysrq @ 01:05 Jul 1

Yay! You're back! I missed you. Now go vote (for (please)). Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 03:30 1 July 2008

Insomnia

I'm torn. The article is wonderful but I really really don't like first person thingys for some reason. I'm sad. --Sir DJ ~ Irreverent Icons-flag-au Noobaward Wotm Unbooks mousepad GUN 08:36, 1 July 2008 (UTC)

Erm... Ok, not sure if I can be much help resolving the issue as I'm slightly bias. May I suggest flipping a two headed coin? Anyway I'm glad you think it's wonderful! Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 08:41 1 July 2008

Hey tahnks for calling me cool. Baseball1 6 Join HereBaseball16 17:56, 1 July 2008 (UTC)

You know what'll make you cooler? Voting, here and here but here esspecially. Also we need to sort out that sig cos you still have code spewing everywhere. do you have this version of your sig in a subpage of yours? if not you need to put it there and then have something like this {{subst:nosubst|User:Baseball16/sig}} in your signature prefernce with the Raw Signature box ticked, that should make things neater and take up less space when you sign. I think I mentioned this to you with another sig but you need to do it with all sigs so just add a different number to the subpagename to differentiate between them. Also thanks for thanks for thanking me for calling you cool. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 18:23 1 July 2008
Voted in both. (PS The subst:nosubst thing messed up the time and put it in a diffrent line.)

Good idea about the other subpage thing. I will do it right away.Baseball1 6 Join HereBaseball16 17:04, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Also join my Userpage thing. AKA The Sexy$R$ News. Baseball1 6 Join HereBaseball16 22:37, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Orian is there anywhere else I can vote?UnarchistFounding Member Baseball16Mario peachOptical2Baseball16 15:17, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Not currently, I was half joking when I told you to vote I seriously just meant it was an option. You did like my article though, didn't you? Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 15:22 7 July 2008
Of course there is! There are always places to vote on Uncyc! Try the rest of VFH, VFD, UotM, PotM, UN:EGA and UN:FP for starters. Got a voting addiction? We can feed it! --UU - natter UU Manhole 15:27, Jul 7
Well yes. There are those things. None of which I'm on right now (And I hope I'll never be on VFD), but yeah if you like voting follow some of those links U.U. just pointed out. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 15:34 7 July 2008
Cool this should make me the coolest.67.189.185.73 23:06, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

One slightly bedraggled n00b

You still adopting folk? I've tried to make my mark but, well, I sense there's things what I can learn from someone more experienced. Oh, and if I'm going to send Gregg's Pasties, it needs to be somewhere which will get them before they go mouldy.

Anyway, yadda yadda, how's about it? --Gladstone Rt Hon W E Gladstone MP GOM | Converse | Icons-flag-gb Yorks Rose 00:40, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Sure yeah, I'll adopt you, I'll just sort out the userboxes and stuff, make it all official. Also may I direct you to the above comment I left for baseball regarding signatures? Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 04:18 2 July 2008

Awkward Conversation

Thanks for the review. It was really helpful. I was a little worried about making too many umms and ers, as I don't want to go too over the top with it, but I agree with you. If you think more are needed, that makes me feel a little better, and I'll probably add some more. I'll be sure to add some more links in there too.

And thanks. The awards are pretty cool, and I'll continue to write. Thou(the feature) is a pretty good article, but I think awkward conversation is better. I'll make some changes, and RAHB said he could do some audio for it, and then I'll probably try to get it featured. Your Insomnia had many parts that made me laugh hard. I read it over the first time you put it through PR, but it looked a little daunting to review since I hadn't done one before. It's a great article, and I hope it gets featured. Thanks again for the review. The Woodburninator (woodtalk) (woodstalk) 03:42, 3 July 2008 (UTC)

You is welcome. =D Yeah I do think it's a possibility that Awkward Conversation could be featured (I hope so!) as I gave it fourty and I don't often give marks that high. Yeah it was also probably best to start off with a shorter article to review first (esspecially when length was one of my own concerns) but I'm sure you can return the reviewing favour some other time. Also thanks for the vote on Insomnia, I'm glad people like it. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 03:52 3 July 2008

Give a man a chance!

I get to the top 5 bit last. Keep your shirt on, I wasn't going to forget! ;-) --UU - natter UU Manhole 11:03, Jul 3

Oh, O-OK. S-sorry Mr U.U.U. Sir. Also thanks for the RotM nom and vote, was it really cos of melty blood? It was a scary article though and worse it wasn't any good. Ah well such is life. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 12:07 3 July 2008
Yes melty blood. So, like, I'm just totally writing this article and I was wondering if you'd be cool to review when I finally finish it and put it up for peeing upon? - This Is Just A Tribute To The Greatest Sig Of All Time! [16:09 5 July]
mmm, this really should be under a new heading... /tearfully Oh! My first... First Pee Review request!? *Sniff* I shall be honoured! Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 16:12 5 July 2008
I thought about a new heading, but I couldn't be bothered... and you should be honoured. See what I did there? Reversed the smallness! Clever me. - This Is Just A Tribute To The Greatest Sig Of All Time! [16:14 5 July]
I am not a girl!!! I think! Erm... - This Is Just A Tribute To The Greatest Sig Of All Time! [16:22 5 July]
I'll walk you through how to check: Now, what do you have between your legs? Is it a... aaa... er -- What do girls have between tehir legs? Never looked if I'm honest. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 16:25 5 July 2008
Hey, slut! - This Is Just A Tribute To The Greatest Sig Of All Time! [17:16 5 July]
give a man a chance yeah?Yes, dear. Oh my god! Dr Who! fucking fantastic! Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 18:48 5 July 2008
Didn't watch it because I missed the two beforehand...plan to watch it on DVD. Also I've been updating the list! It's really fun! - Sir FSt. Yettie (talk) (>>) [18:49 5 July]
Oh you just gotta watch it -- go find it on the internet! Ep 11 is a rival for the best episode yet (though Blink is still at the top) and the past two are just brilliant -- esspecially if you follow Torchwood as well (even better if your sad enough to have watched the Sarah Jane Adventures on CBBC)! Awsome awsome stuff! anyway that's my rave over. I shall get round to the review as soon as possible. and don't rub it in about the list. I wanna do that. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 18:59 5 July 2008

Your Blog

Consider it commented on! Also, if you're so inclined, you could leave a message about MY new story.   Le Cejak <20:49, 06 Jul 2008>

I shall, but it will probably be tomorrow as I need to sleep. Thanks for commenting though, like I said in the reply I've got a good idea of where it's going.
Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 22:15 6 July 2008

Football

Thanks for that! It was much as I expected - I'd written it in about 10 minutes for a football noticeboard in response to a rather verbose writer of match reports, when someone commented about the last time the Germans and Russians played each other, and decided it stood on its own quite well.

And seriously, gay, pacifist and know nothing about football? Could you fulfil any more clichés...? Never mind, I'll probably not write too many war/sport articles, they're not exactly my forte! --User-Gladstone-icon Rt Hon W E Gladstone MP GOM | Converse | Icons-flag-gb Yorks Rose 20:51, 6 July 2008 (UTC)

Yeah like I said it may be hard to pull of to a spectacular standard but it was a good effort. And as for clichés well I don't think I fufill that many actually. For example I don't play a clarinet and I don't listen to cheesy pop music (often), I'm also fuck-ugly and my accent is pretty bland as apposed to flamboyant... Erm, yeah I took you a bit seriously there. Sorry. It's getting late and I don't want to delete what I wrote there as that would mean writing something else. And now I'm rambling... night night. Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 22:25 6 July 2008

THE SHAPE!!

The little shapey thing is a truncated icosahedron. It has 32 sides, 12 pentagonal, 20 hexagonal. 90 edges and 60 vertices. --Sir General Minister G5 FIYC UPotM [Y] #21 F@H KUN13:53, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

Aww, you just ruined my life =( I was operating under the illusion it had 57 (Hey it was moving I couldn't count them!) as I found it somewhere marked with 57. Oh well I took it out of my sig anyway. I like it though; it can stay. Thanks for this little info bite though, something I can say to impress people... Any chance you know of an actual 57 sided shape? Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 13:59 7 July 2008

Thanks again for the help and the review!

Well, I took your comments under advisement from the Pee Review on Goldilocks and the Three Bears and it did make for a better article - I even added a disturbing picture (!) at just the right place (!). Zombiebaron has even nomm'd it for VFH! Go and look it over and then consider supporting it, if you dare. Hugs, Dame PPsigPPlips.gifGUN PotY WotM 2xPotM 17xVFH VFP Poo PMS •YAP• 15:41, 7 July 2008 (UTC)

I literally just did before I read your comment here. And that clown is scary! Well done on the article! Have Fun! MuCal. BFF Sir Orian57!Talk!PEE!Read!UnProvise!Awards! 15:44 7 July 2008

And then Otter Bear said "just don't get on the carpet..."

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