User talk:Eggman n3
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edit Thanks for the vote
|THIS USER VOTES WISELY|
They voted for me. And I didn't even have to bribe them.
...assuming I read the vote correctly and that was your vote at VFH. If not, please disregard this award and check out the article, then vote for it if you like it. Man, are you as confused as I am? I know I should be thanking SOMEONE...--22:33, 5 March 2006 (UTC)
edit Response to your Request
Not bad at all. As requested, here are some suggestions for this article's improvement...
- Every single article on Uncyclopedia needs a picture. I've discovered that this has become expected, and if you don't have a picture, your article will often get NRV'ed (or tagged as having no redeeming value), and some of the non-admins will slap that on articles w/o pictures without even reading them.
- Remove the self-reference in "traits", it doesn't fit the rest of the article
- Consider getting a little closer to the truth. It's generally better to start with truth and tweak it to be more funny from there. Often times, the closer you are to truth, the funnier the article will be.
If you want any other suggestions on improving an article, I'm always willing to help. If you want someone to tell you an article is funny, I'm less likely to do that. :) Try David Gerard or Mhaille for that. They're the nice people around here. Also, IRC is always a place to get acquainted with the community, if you're interested. Cheers.-- 23:14, 5 March 2006 (UTC)
- PS: If you want to do an article for all my other red links on Peyton Manning, you have my blessing. :) Red links are kinda frowned on here, too.-- 23:18, 5 March 2006 (UTC)