User talk:Administrator/Instant Water

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HEY! You're only a failure if you don't try. I know it sounds like an after-school special, but...   Le Cejak <-> 15:02, 12 November 2007 (UTC)

Oh no, I'm trying, my first attempt merely failed. --SPY Administrator (Complain|I rock|In memoriam) HMRFRA Bluegarrisoncapsig.png 30px-Sucrose_b.gif WH 02:42, 13 November 2007 (UTC)

edit Epic Fail

Humour: 3.7 avg of all the sections
  • intro (6)

DAMN you have a lot of templates. Okay, I'll grade you on that in the Formatting section. Well, this isn't quite adequate. It's an introduction, sure, but it's kinda just a lame one liner. Expand, maybe?

  • 1 How To Use Instant Water® (5)

Oh. Is that what this article is about?

  • 2 How Instant Water® Works (4)

It's just completely random. It makes no sense to me!

  • 3 Why You Need Instant Water® (4)

This is just a list. Bad form.

  • 4 Is this a scam? (2)

It's a single sentence.

  • 5 You are lying. (1)

It's a series of templates.

Concept: 5 I like the idea of "instant..." whatever, but this article is absolute nonsense.
Prose and formatting: 3 Badly written and badly formatted. Sorry Admin!
Images: 1 1 for a huge amount of templates.
Miscellaneous: 3.2 avg'd
Final Score: 15.9 No, try again:
  • Think about instant water... what would we be interested in?
  1. How is it different from regular water?
  2. How is it marketed?
  3. What's its history?
  4. Who buys it?
  5. Where is it sold?
  6. What's the future of instant water?
  • Get rid of all those stupid templates and injokes.
  • I hope I helped! Keep writing, Admin!
Reviewer:   Le Cejak <-> 03:52, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
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