User:Kip the Dip/DP review

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edit Dirty Potter

Ok, I put it up for Pee Review... AGAIN! I'd like someone who ISN'T Alksub, and someone who ACTUALLY LISTENED TO THE AUDIO first, hence the blatant message, to review Dirty Potter. That's the only way you'll get the article, if you listen to it first. So IF YOU HAVEN'T LISTENED TO THE AUDIO, PLEASE DON'T REVIEW! People have made up shit before that isn't online or anything like that (even thought DP is online), like that stupid Raoul Whatsits thing, and THEY get no problems whatsoever. Yes, I know it doesn't have enough pictures. It would be helpful if anyone could provide some. Harry Potter hentai would be nice, because someone said I needed more rule 34. I think it's really stupid that only one person can review a page. The spoiler warning is up there because of "Snape kills Dumbledore" and "Snape is the Half-Blood Prince." I took down the NSFW because I thought that was for article content, and I didn't know it only applied to pics. Any grammatical and other minor fixes, beleive it or not, YOU CAN FIX YOURSELF because it's *GASP* A FUCKING WIKI!!! I'm asking for reviews on the IDEA, CONTENT, and WORDING of the article, not whether I've made some grammar mistakes. What I hate most is when people tell me "It could use some improvement" and "It has potential" and "You just need to work on it more" but don't tell me what I have to do!! Tell me EXACTLY where the mistakes are! Tell me EXACTLY what to do. If it's minor things that YOU AS A USER CAN FIX, then by all means, please do so. Oh, and most importantly...

edit THIS IS NOT A FANFICTION! THIS IS NOT A SATIRE OF A FANFICTION! THIS IS FOR FANS AND HATERS OF HARRY POTTER! DIRTY POTTER IS SUPPOSED TO BE A JOKE AND SHOULD BE TREATED AS SUCH! THAT'S WHAT I THOUGHT UNCYCLOPEDIA WAS ABOUT: JOKES! AND I DON'T WANT ANYONE THINKING THEY'RE CLEVER AND SAYING SOMETHING LIKE "YOU'RE RIGHT, THIS ARTICLE IS SO BAD, IT *IS* A JOKE! LOLWTFBBQ!" EITHER!

edit Oh, and ALKSUB: STAY AWAY!

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