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From: User:Happytimes/Zzz/2009Q4-3of8

edit Carebears

You are taking on Carebears? My first truly original article on Uncyclopedia? The article I keep looking at and groaning and wishing I could work out a way to actually make it interesting? Pup

(Ooh, I like that new? signature, but the userpage link is broken.)
Yeah, I was trying to take it on tonight, but am sleepy now (thus the proofread template so I will remember it later as I haven't officially signed up for the Uncyclopedia:Collaboratory yet). I thinked it definitely needs some actual Carebear images and some false as well. It's a great start and I hope my humble edits give you a warm-fuzzy push in the right direction.  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  06:34, December 2, 2009 (UTC)
Definitely needs images. The carebears that are included in here are the original carebears and the personalities are - scarily - pretty close to the originals as well. The major problem that I had with this is the intro and the ending. The intro is nonsense, which I try to avoid random humour, but seem to have gone down that track here, and the ending... isn't. I can flesh out the stuff about the bears themselves, and give a brief synopsis of their stories, but I want to redo the start completely. As much as I love the Shakespeare references, they are stopping this being feature-worthy. Pup
Ah I see. Yeah, you're probably right, Shakespeare references are like putting in blinking text for no good reason other than it's blinky and is awesome!!!. Finding Carebear images is as easy as watching[1] the results in your favorite search engine. However, I do have a couple of good images for that somewhere in my files & will upload them soonish.  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  06:53, December 3, 2009 (UTC) File location: ________ .

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edit d

Thanks for proofread, And yes, "a's and the's" aren't my forte ;) PoliszSir Ptok-BentonicznyPisz tutaj KUN 11:15, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

edit Thanks for joining my 'cult'...

In accordance with the Uncyclopedia Legal Department, I hereby verify your membership. You are now legally official and stuff.  23:12, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Now I can get to suing stuff!  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  11:57, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

edit Carebears to the second power.

What do you think? Ready to put it up for a PEE review? Pup

The concept is awesome but I think we need a bit more copy-editing before you dunk it in the pee review. (I also downloaded about 30 non-cousin images if we want to expand it in wirededit weird ways.) Anyway a little more editing and I think we can consider moving this from the B team to the A team!  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  09:17, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

edit Image for turkey ball

Hya, was the picture that you posted original? Did you manipulated it somehow? ~Jewriken.GIF 11:04, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ooops! I uploaded the wrong item (JPG vs. gif) from my files & didn't even catch it!
Each picture wasn't taken by me, they were found and cleverly manipulated into my man-van with promises of candy. I did some time searching the interwebs to find the perfect flesh-tunnel pictures for my concept and these little buggers were the ones I founded.
Each has been cleaned-up (stretched, prodded, sprinkled with delousing powder, depixelated, showered, sharpened, animated and given a nice white border) for clarity & re-sized for conformity. This one here (that I put up by mistake) File:Cocker Ring Bearer.JPG has minimal formatting other than some cropping. This one here File:Cocker Ring Bearer.gif has a couple of hours poured into it. And by couple of hours I mean jars of honey; and by into I mean onto. Hope that helps.  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  08:38, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

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