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Just imagine that the "Originality" category is, instead, "Prose," because "Originality" is basically the same exact thing as "Concept" and for god knows why "Prose" is not a factor to consider on this comedy writing website.

edit House of Hangover

  • Humour - Score: 6/10 Comment: A series of ridiculous scenarios that are laid out at our feet and never expanded upon. What gives? This is very fertile ground for hyperbolic humor, don't just state it and let it lie there like a wagging fish, go deeper!
  • Concept - Score: 7/10 Comment: I'm a sucker for puns. This one was obvious, but commendable. Did not stray at all from the concept very much, so that's all well and good.
  • Originality - Score: 5/10 Comment: The quote by Oscar Wilde felt stilted in a strange, foreign way. Again, I felt like the understated, rather dry nature of the prose does not do the article much of a service given the outsized concept.
  • Formatting - Score: 7/10 Comment: Stumpy but presentable.
  • Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: There are images. Great gallery.
  • Total - Score: 33/50 Comment: For an article about Drunken Royalty, this needs to be drunker and more royal, if ya catch my drift.

edit UnNews:Leprechauns support Obama

  • Humour - Score: 4/10 Comment: Sorry fella, but this just did not make me laugh a bit. Probably because the article is so simple as...
  • Concept - Score: 3/10 Comment: People from Boston are Leprechauns, because of Irish. Ha? You don't capitalize on the potential absurdity at all, shrugging off only token references to pots of gold and the like. The sentence about other fairy tale creatures opens an interesting vista for exploration, but you ignore it for more canned jokes. None of the Obama stuff is original or groundbreaking, either (Yes we can? Yo man it's literally 4 years later)
  • Originality - Score: 4/10 Comment: Several grammatical errors that rupture the article's flow. Quotes straddle the middle ground between plainspeak and stereotyped dialect. This is not good.
  • Formatting - Score: 6/10 Comment: De-italicize the quotes. Some misspellings. Standard for UnNews.
  • Images - Score: 7/10 Comment: Not bad
  • Total - Score: 24/50 Comment: Inherently flawed by concept, but there are the buddings of good ideas in here, plus some downright decent craftsmanship for a fresh writer.

edit The Hawaiian conquest of Wales

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edit Cthulhu Tequila

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edit Giovanni Battista Bugatti

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edit UnPoetia:Ode to Cthulhu

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edit UnNews:Amy Winehouse is Alive and Kicking

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edit HowTo:Join The Internet Wrestling Community

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edit Frank Bush

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edit UnNews:Lance Armstrong: My Moped Shame

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edit UnNews:Baumgartner skydive 'was bachelor party prank'

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edit UnNews:An American's guide to Scottish Independence

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edit UnNews:Obama wins debate with Fresh Prince rap

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edit UnNews:Homosexual comic characters 'giving geeks ideas'

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edit UnNews:Chavez plays down "crush you all" comment

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edit UnNews:Number of gay TV characters "still far behind number of gay actors and producers"

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edit UnNews:FaceBook comments arrest terrifies trolls

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edit Civilization V

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edit UnNews:Limbo recalled in several countries due to injury risk

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edit The_Foundations_of_Real_Time_and_Turn_Based_Strategy

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edit Put_your_credit_card_details_here

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edit Wii_U_on_indefinite_hold

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edit UnTunes:InFamous Last Words

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edit Date Masamune

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edit HowTo:Upset the Gods

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edit Stu Pickles

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edit Imagine (song)

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edit UnTunes:I will survive (Jurassic Park)

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edit Tea-leaf reading

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edit Bill Nye the Science Guy

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