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edit House of Hangover

  • Humour - Score: 6/10 Comment: Some good stuff in here but some of it is overly predictable and quite often the joke is just too bizarre to be funny such as "several champagne bottles,all full of semen." There is not a lot funny in being so overly bizarre in that particular case. Some of this is just too dry and some is too wild. A balance needs to be hit better than it has.
  • Concept - Score: 8/10 Comment: Alright you pulled off the pun reasonably well, just when you float away into barely avoiding stupity that it lets you down. For instance that "Fuck America" bit could be pulled off better than it has.
  • Originality - Score: 7/10 Comment: Oddly no-one has thought to develop the idea of an entire article based off this kind of idea but it's fair to say that you are not the first to portray a royal family as a bunch of fat drunk rich people. It's reasonably original but the way you have gone about it isn't exactly new.
  • Formatting - Score: 9/10 Comment: It's pretty well formatted, would be 10 except for that one red link, I like to see galleries centred and images left at thumb size is a bit ugly in my personal view but then again to make them bigger you need more content.
  • Images - Score: 8/10 Comment: I like the images except the first one seeing as you have taken an existing badge and just added stuff around it. You could have just modified the original to include pictures of alcohol instead of adding to it the way you have
  • Total - Score: 38/50 Comment: Boner.

edit UnNews:Leprechauns support Obama

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edit The Hawaiian conquest of Wales

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edit Cthulhu Tequila

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edit Giovanni Battista Bugatti

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edit UnPoetia:Ode to Cthulhu

  • Humour - Score: 9/10 Comment: This made me seriously lol in several cases. Good job, only complain is that it was tragically too short. But being a poem and all that can't really be helped.
  • Concept - Score: 10/10 Comment: You grasped your concept pretty well in my opinion
  • Originality - Score: 7/10 Comment: Definitely something different. But as I'll explain further on your choice of image wasn't really that original...
  • Formatting - Score: 6/10 Comment: This needs some links to other articles man! Also the image could be better formatted with the text as a caption in the thumb insteado over the image
  • Images - Score: 6/10 Comment: Sorry but that "Ceiling X is watching you Y" joke has been done like 50,000 times before. Something original and actually funny!
  • Total - Score: 38/50 Comment: Very good, just work on the images and links please.

edit UnNews:Amy Winehouse is Alive and Kicking

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edit HowTo:Join The Internet Wrestling Community

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edit Frank Bush

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edit UnNews:Lance Armstrong: My Moped Shame

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edit UnNews:Baumgartner skydive 'was bachelor party prank'

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edit UnNews:An American's guide to Scottish Independence

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edit UnNews:Obama wins debate with Fresh Prince rap

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edit UnNews:Homosexual comic characters 'giving geeks ideas'

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edit UnNews:Chavez plays down "crush you all" comment

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edit UnNews:Number of gay TV characters "still far behind number of gay actors and producers"

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edit UnNews:FaceBook comments arrest terrifies trolls

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edit Civilization V

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edit UnNews:Limbo recalled in several countries due to injury risk

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edit The_Foundations_of_Real_Time_and_Turn_Based_Strategy

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edit Put_your_credit_card_details_here

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edit Wii_U_on_indefinite_hold

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edit UnTunes:InFamous Last Words

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edit Date Masamune

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edit HowTo:Upset the Gods

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edit Stu Pickles

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edit Imagine (song)

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edit UnTunes:I will survive (Jurassic Park)

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edit Tea-leaf reading

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edit Bill Nye the Science Guy

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