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edit Uncyclopedia:Vegan of the Year

Al! What's the rule how to nom you for this? Someone described you as "FA every 30 seconds Al" - which seems to be the case these days. Can I nom you for this? And you have the year to rack up AYE votes. Is it too early? I'm ready.--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 07:37, May 4

Thanks for the thought, but Stop it. Go take some Soma and calm down, you're just on a high after your feature article. I've had a measly number of features compared to Guildy and others. I will now take the portion of Soma which you generously left for me awhile back. And to be serious, writer of the year is nommed and voted when the year is finished, which in the case of all good pagans is Samhain. Ummmmmm, Soma. Al sans chains 9:50 4 5 mMx
Haa, OK, now I know. If you keep writing winners all year long Guildy will have a harder go. Although he is a wonder-winner writer, every time. At the right time, when you feel confident, I'm glad to nom you.
I wrote to MrN tonight and will see what reply I get. He did say a month ago that he had a job to do and would be busy getting rich. I miss him too. Not sure about Max.
What are you working on now? Did I see "clit"? Speaking of Soma, it is only available to the angels... that's why I live here. hehe! Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 17:09, May 4
Ah, so that's where MrN went. Some regulars all seemed to leave at the same time with no forwarding Talk page. Working on a few things on and off, James Bevel, HowTo:Reinvent the wheel, and stating up Yoga which I'll play with when the "writing about data and consciousness" mood comes over me. You could actually help with something if you would, and thank you if you do (and even if you don't). I've tried to upload the pic of James Bevel that wikipedia uses, and have its code on the top of the page but can't get it to produce anything. Would you try if you have a moment? I want to put it right at the start of the article, on the right. Thanks. Did you see clit? I'm speechless at such vulgarity on the internet. I see you pecking away at your other pages (I go back over mine and tweek a lot too, productive use of time and when something new emerges it's easy to play it into the page), nice work. And I'd love to see you get about four features in a row very quickly, and that is not impossible. Yay! Enjoy, Al 17:32 4 5
I knew Guildy was a sure-winner, but I just saw he has over 20 FAs. Wow! I'd love to help you with Yoga (I spent 43 years and 3 languages learning the "types" of yoga, viz., Bhakti-yoga, Kriya-yoga (Karma-yoga), Astanga (hatha) yoga, and Jnana-yoga, which together make up Hinduism or Sanatan-dharma. Buddhists also follow "Jnana-yoga" as do Jains, etc. I'll take a look at it. How deep do you want to go? Yoga means "conjoining" (soul + supersoul, etc.). Yoga is kinda like sex, it has a means and an end (goal). Siddha-yoga is also part of Astanga-yoga (Patanjali-system), and 4 different sampradayas (sects) make up Bhakti yoga. So it could really be a riot of an article. I just did a timely one Jet Lag, as promised..but I'm not sure it might be better as a "HowTo:Beat jet lag" article instead? I'll do whatever you advise. Cheers! Soon--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 19:09, May 4
Of course, it would be fun to collab with you. The page I "see" would pull out the tech and the results of Raja (Astanga sp?) Yoga, which, as you know, combine them all. The one-mind, the ability to "Be" what you "see" or "imagine", the total control of muscles, emotions, thought, consideration and intent, etc. etc., while keeping the funny. I've got a great pic to make fun of Hatha yoga, which most westerners think is yoga (a part of the system, of course, but just a part). The task: To summarize the data from the Sutras of Patanjali in a simple and funny format. Why don't we do the email thing for this. Mine is on file, please send a note to it and we can go in-depth on this. You may have fun doing an edit sweep of Tantra as well. It was left by someone who thought he was working on Wikipedia or somewhere, and I've added the funny after he abandoned it. More funny to add, and a bit more in-depth to go. Thanks, we have a good and fun mission here. Al unchain 20:50 4 5 MMX
Al! I tried to help with Tantra. Tan=Tanu (physical body) and Tra=trayati (free). If the angle is on sex then that's fine. But the Rama picture was out of place, being Vaishnav-tattva and not tantric. If you don't like it or can't use it, no sweat. But I had to try and help, and that's how I see it as funny.
Making Patanjali's 'astanga' (asta=8, anga=part) Yoga-sutra into a funny will be really hard because of the gravity of the subject. But as they are really after "siddhis" (powers of mind over matter) it could be a gas to be creative. Like HowTo:Blow yourself. There is something like that before using Bhagavat-Purana and made into Ancient Uncyclopedia, but it was kind of a dud on Pee cause people were not familiar with Vedic literature.
I changed Jet Lag to HowTo:Beat jet lag cause it just seemed like a "how to" kinda thing. You're more than welcome to edit or change any part of that (or any of my stuff). Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 07:16, May 5
I'm not sure how to get your mail. But if you know how please write me. Later!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 07:18, May 5

edit John Peel's Record Box

Dude! I just watched a BBC TV special called "John Peel's Record Box had my band. Then I found it on Wiki along with his Peelenium list:

Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 09:02, May 6

Nice, congrats. And the list is a very good history of music through the century, thanks for linking it. Everyone has their favorite music, yet this is an interesting and valuable source of some of the best. And your story, at some point one of the major TV newsmagazines in the states, or at least a cableshow, should tell your story. It would make a very good movie too, say take a few years there and you get a good mix of music, anti-war feelings, an American finding himself in India and what you went through there. A good story. --- Saw the new pic on tantra, a nice one. I'll tweek the caption a bit, and maybe put one of the pics on the left to not crowd them. Tantrad, Al 1:14 7 5 MMX


edit *Sniff*

YOUR MOTHER SUCKS COCKS IN HELL MOTHERFUCKER! got deleted right in the middle of an edit... *sob!*  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  07 May 2010 ~ 02:19 (UTC)

I saw, and already left Mordillo a note. How do we appeal? Al few minutes later
Puppy did too.
Appeal? nothing but -- Symbol EXTERMINATE vote small REVOLUTION!!!  ... right after my nap.  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  07 May 2010 ~ 02:29 (UTC)
And nice template. Al moments later
Thanks, still working on the links for the bottom... but for another day.  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  07 May 2010 ~ 02:37 (UTC)

edit Looks like you finally got back in

I ran into a problem logging in even when I tried different browsers. Also my watchlist (or is now called following?) was publicly displayed on my user page, which upset me. I posted a note on both at Uncyclopedia:Report a problem. Since I've been here, every time they change the login procedure it screws things up. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 03:00, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know how, because I had to create two socks when the entire name, birthdate, SS number, etc. was up, and then when I logged on it was just name and password again, which is the only way it looks like I can log on (when I sign up on most sites I just give random emails and birthdates, and don't remember them). Good to have you back. Al a few seconds later
I'd really suggest posting your problems at Uncyclopedia:Report a problem. The more of us who post there, the more likely they'll be to fix things and, Sophia willing, stop changing the login. I've been here less than a year, and in that time they've changed it a few times and it never worked right when they did it. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 04:28, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Mordillo posted that the best place tp make comments on this issue, which affects all of Wikia, is here. WHY???PuppyOnTheRadio 18:12, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

edit Sand Storm

Dude! How about this Sandstorm?
Sandstorm

Awesome Sand storm coming

. When finally ready can I Nom it for VFH? Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 16:49, May 7
Thanks. You want to nom it? I thought of putting it up, but it's nice you think it VFH worthy. Thanks. Please take a look at the page and whenever you think it's ready, and I put enough data in about why you want to create a sandstorm. That's a good sandstorm pic, I don't know if it will fit in on the page because the point of view is of the sandstorm coming at you and not of creating it, unless the person is really stupid and stands downwind of the sandstorm Hmmmm. Let me work on it. Thanks, Al a few minutes later
Hey, since Funnybony's review wasn't really in-depth (no offense) and I kinda want to take a look, do you mind if I critique it? (Doesn't have to be an official review or anything)--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) 22:25, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Hi, and of course, I'd appreciate it. Never feel you have to ask on something like this. I take all, or almost all, comments and criticism by experienced users with an open mind (and a closed wallet). Thanks. Al 1:43 8 5 MMX
OK, I'll do it on the talk page. Oh, and it had less to do with Funnybony's review and more to do with my current reviewing fix.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) 02:58, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Done; I wouldn't consider that indepth. But, it's not a real review, so I don't sweat it.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) 03:41, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, I left on note on the talk page already too! Nice work, and your suggestions will be taken to heart and worked upon. Appreciated. Al a few minutes later

edit Lord Christopher Monckton

Al! What do you think of this? MrN liked it a lot, but said people might vote against it based on disagreement rather than creative merit. Good stuff on Sand Storm. Maybe drop the "pucker and blow" and get right into the HoTo; because it's a bit to simple. Just a thought.--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 19:06, May 8

Hello, and I'll take a good look at it. The page I saw you working on and liked a lot was that space one, the one with Dave Scott. I actually met Dave Scott once, a very playful and intelligent guy (those attributes seem to go together). That's a page I want to read over carefully. And just before looking at this note I made the change to "Just put your lips together and. . .blow, the line it should have been. Can't drop the line, because it was the inspiration for the page when I wrote it on your talk page. I trust the muse and keep the inspirations. Have you checked out Tantra? Put some good yucks in there, and thanks for inspiring me to work on the page again with your collab stuff. Now, lentils and rice just about finished. Yummmmm. Al sans chains21:48 8 5 MMX
Al - by all means keep the inspiration stuff. I just looked at Sand Storm and so-far good as I hoped. Lunar Launch Saga is 1) a total-clash of character types, and 2) seemingly preposterous-procedure. Hope you can make it work. Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 04:47, May 9

edit June 2001: And the Moon Be Still As Bright a.k.a. Bradbury Revisited

Don't worry, I like Bradbury's works too. I think I have about 7 or so of his books lying around up here including one of those huge collections. Probably one of my favorite stories by him is "The Beggar on O'Connel Bridge" which is in no way a Science Fiction story. I just thought it would add a humorous twist if it was suggested that almost all of his stories aren't actually Sci-Fi and that he had just somehow ended up in the genre based off his early works. I heard that the crazy old dude used to lay off sleep to write if an idea came to him in the night because he never wanted to lose it. Even though a good number of his stories aren't "Sci-Fi" I like most of them anyways because he has a nice style to his writings and they always end up being interesting on some level. So what I'm trying to say is, I wasn't writing a hate-rant about Bradbury so much as just a humorous bit to make him seem out of place amongst the others. --Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 20:22, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I can see those opening sections being too long for a simple "History" section. I want to wait and see how the article ends up looking to see if there's a more appropriate place to put it, because depending on what some of the sections develop into their may be a better spot for it. --Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 00:24, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

edit Warm piss water

I think you should get a pee. A very warm one no doubt. I would probably do it, but it might take a while.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) 01:35, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

I will not be peed upon on this night of nights, I would rather pee upon myself (which I have just done) than to take more than moments away from my task of working on Warm piss water. Urine is nothing but a slight hinderance when in the throes of Challenge!!! Regards, Al des chain a few minutes later
I knew I saw a good article in the making when I made that first KEEP vote on VFD. Great job, Aleister de Cadenas! —Pelozurian (talk) 22:35, 10 May 2010 (UTC)

edit Tantra

It is excellent. Ready for VFH. Should I Nom it? Do you want a Pee first? Did you see todays UnNews? Move to DC cause Obama finally DID something, he legalized weed in Washington. Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 22:33, May 10

I think the D.C. matter is medical marijuana. California will vote on full legalization in November, and that's when we need everyone we know in Calif. working. Tantra, no, not ready yet, it feels like we need a few more edit sweeps and more funny. A little too many long passages where the funny doesn't break the serious up enough. We don't want to lose data, and the entire Tantra point of unconditional love for God/consciousness/void isn't brought out enough. So more to do, but it will be a very good page where three of us can share credit (you, myself, and the guy who wrote the beginning serious data). Al sans chains 23:12 10 5 MMX

edit Red Sea Parting: Fun for the Whole Family!

Anything in particular that you think would be phrased better or need tweaked on Moses' magic explained? Also, I'm still debating on the surf thing. I reckon that while it may not provide for the best surfing over the separation (unless it was small enough for them to jump back and forth somehow...) but it has to create some interesting effects on other parts of the Red Sea. It makes one wonder...--Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 00:24, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think what Funnybony may have been getting at was surfing both along the entire length of the part and down the wall. And it would have to be an biblical surfer, maybe Joshua (been awhile since I've read that part of the Bible, was it Joshua who was Moses' number two? Him, whoever that guy was, he could be the surfer?). I'll look at the page now and get back here soon. Al few minutes later
I want to say it was Abraham, but that's not right. It starts with an 'A' though. Here it is, Aaron. Hey, he was Moses' brother too so when he says "bro" it can be quite literal. Gnarly!--Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 00:34, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
Hank Aaron? Maybe. There was a 'J' guy too, I think. The page may need more work than I first thought. First the easy stuff, in need of quite a few commas and periods and boring things like that. Then the flow of the page, more work there. I lost the concept at several points. Pics are great. So more work, but the end result will be terrific. Can I do a grammar run-through for a few minutes? Al Hank Aaron? I don't know? few minutes later
Be my guest, I tend to type horribly and not notice the errors until someone else points them out. --Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 00:43, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
Jacob? Give me a few minutes on the page, check the recent changes. Thanks for trusting me to play on the grammar. Al, few minutes later
Joshua? That was a fun read, it took me three readings to get my head around the concepts and how they tied together. Lots of stuff there. Al somewhere down the rabbit hole
Well according to Wikipedia, which rivals the Bible in accuracy, there was a Joshua who took up the reigns after Moses snuffed it and did some other stuff back when the old Geezer was still alive. And thanks for the grammar edits, it reads quite a bit cleaner now.--Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 01:29, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
Joshua! Yeah, put the fucker on a surfboard and let him riiiidddddeeeeeeee. An idea for the name of the surfer, anyway, which would link the present time parting of the Red Sea with the "first" parting. And you're welcome, thanks for the trust to let me play with it. Al few minutes later
You wouldn't surf on the inside walls of the part, you would surf on the top outside break on both sides. Cheers--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 10:43, May 12
I'm thinking of "They Would Be Giants" when that one guy surfed down the face of the monster wave, 120 feet high or so. Did you mean along the break, where it parts, on the edge lengthwise all across the sea? I'm trying to imagine the wave action on the parting of the Red Sea, an interesting MondoBible concept. Al a few minutes later
Laird-big-wave

Laird Hamilton (bottom right corner) tries yet again to commit ritual suicide by riding another 50 million megaton wave off the coast of Hawaii. Note: This photo only shows the bottom half of the wave because the top half is hidden by clouds.

The top of the part, on the top of the sea on both sides (outsides) would be a hell-of-a-curl to ride as the water parted constantly, long enough for one to walk or drive through the part. Outside at the top of the break would look like this picture of our hero.--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 12:46, May 12

edit Tantra

Hi Al! I've been on Tantra. Hope you like the additions. It is too bulky, and without headers or subheaders it's a lot of content to swallow. Kind of too long. Too much text becomes a blur. The original writer put too much drab content, so much that its a drag. It's like an padded and over-done Wikipedia article to start with. And kind of makes the same point TWICE. Also the last pic is sooo ugly as to be unfunny. If you want to show a Thai girl then lets show a Thai girl, bro! Either ugly slut or raving beauty. Check out these two choices for Thai girl pic.

Girl10

Thai girl 1

Girl2

Thai girl 2

Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 10:31, May 12

Hi. You've been on Tantra! How long was the high, did you drop two tabs or twenty? Did you experience the famed wrijv??? Send me some! The tantra page, have to cut some of that and I actually lopped some off yesterday. Changed the caption to the tiger girl so no nationality is mentioned, I like the look of he pic, the half woman half tiger angle, only mentioned Thailand because I tried to keep it where tigers live. The drabness should be gone but keeping the data, I like it that we first had a content full page on Tantra and get to shape it so it fits in here but retains the original author's information. Will keep working on it, we'll know when it's ready. Al 10:53 12 5 MMX
The secret with the DC, etc. law is how to get 'boredom' classified as a medical condition requiring treatment with the queen of weeds. hehe!
Sure, the pic is fine. Why not say Africa? Yes, we best remove any drab-boring-content, while keeping the point and making the joke. It's getting there. Don't fear deleting "drab boring content". Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 11:34, May 12
Africa is good. Duh me. Yes, trimming in process now, you're right about too much content but we have to keep the data and even make it clearer. A task to fulfill, and I must visit the tiger lady for a pick-me-up. Al, few minutes later
Above is the Yang/Yin of Thai girls. YES, Voidism is getting close to ready. Lets partner this thing, unless you think it's close enough. Hey, Tantra is Tantring!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 12:38, May 12
Thanks for the Thai girls to anchor the sides of this page. I wouldn't partner on voidism, that's yours, but would be happy to do an edit look if you'd like. Crowley and others call the same thing the abyss. The joy is knowing that it's all a void/abyss, and then playing within it. I still quote your words about Uncy being a playground for adults, I'm still a bit surprised not more quality writers edit and write here. Tantra is a long way from completion, a feeling thing, but your edits helped greatly and how you segmented the page works well. Now trimming is the main thing, and I'll get back to that later too. The focus of the page on what is actually prolonged and/or extended sexual play works okay for part of tantra, and as I said, maybe some people will research it further on wiki and through quality materials. This page could give a few people a boost though into a realm of more fun and knowledge. Al later gator
Here's one getting close December 22, 2012. People who vote FOR it should be called "Apocalypse deniers" --- whattya think?--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 16:18, May 12

edit Voidism

This is the one I worked on that's the most ready. But need to edit out any VFH unfriendly crap! If you can pull-if-off please let me know when to Nom it, or please Nom it. It might fly. Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 19:31, May 12

Sounds good, I'll look it over and put some time into it. Not right now, pizza coming and my taste buds dancing. And there are other promises to keep to. But first and foremost, pizza!!!Al in sauce and veggies 20:17 12 5 MMX
Good writing. And I just did and ultra tail spin. In original listy form it failed VFH years ago (I think?) so I can't nom it myself? Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 22:53, May 12
It's good, although I don't think it would pass VFH. It's just missing nothing, or something, or everything, or very little. Seriously though, many of your other pages are better suited for the elusive feature prize. Voidism has what it never takes, and nothing more can be done. Al few minutes later
Dude! If you could take a look at what I have and let me know what is best to work on toward progress I'll get on it. Tantra is really shaping up. But you're right. "Nothing" cannot be nominated - any fool can understand that! Hehe! Cheers--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 07:58, May 13
Will do, at some point soon. I'm going to look more at that Space article. I favor space articles, and I've got a feeling you have a good one in the making there. Tantra seems like it's getting into a positin to reach the final stretch, way to go yet. I think we should use your other Asian woman pic instead of the sexy one, enough of those already. I'll put it in now. Why don't we put Tantra on pee review soon. More later, Al many many hours later

edit Thanks

Thanks for the nom for the Foolitzer. I don't think I'm much of a writer, but I'm willing to fake it. Cheers! Zimbuddha Rev. Zim (Talk) Get saved! 22:00, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

I would never nom you for the Foolitzer, you already have 10. Future Al few minutes later

edit Tefillin

Granted that Tefillin needed a little more expansion, but today's editing strikes me as too random. When I find myself doing this, I read the Wikipedia article (mis-read it, I should say) and the article often writes itself. Spıke ¬ 16:22 13-May-10

Good advice, I haven't read the wiki page and really didn't intend to do a lot of work on Tefillin, just passing by it again after looking at the VFD comments. But I will read the wiki page, and maybe educate myself in the process. I do use wiki for quick research, names, and links and such. Time for prayers and polo, Al 17:05 13 5 MMX

edit Your review

Is done. A bit early, actually.--Sir HELPME Talk (more? --> CUN ROTM NOTM Pleb USS Pees SK ) 05:18, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

edit December 22, 2012

Wow! Your "Diamond cutting" efforts are super, and got me going in the same line with 7 more edits, like deleting the entire section on Dark Riff (which makes sense in 2012 article). Thanks, dude! Cheers--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 06:12, May 15

edit A day in Uncyclopedic history - Christian Bale has been featured!

ChristianBaleAward Matfen
thanks you
for your vote!

His article could not have been featured without you...

Thank you brother. I probably would never have bothered fixing it up if you hadn't put it on VFG in the first place. --Matfen 12:28, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

edit Uncle Tom's Cabin

Good work to you too. I have reverted a small fraction of it, as explained in the change summaries. I toyed with reverting the footnote too. It is not that I dislike Zeus, and the substitution with Buddha (given that Venus is still there) is even more inscrutable. I also removed the description of Evita as "bi-sexual" but maybe this was ill-advised as I see you come back to it in the last section.

Your style is more random than mine, which is fine, but we are writing for effect (namely, that the reader bust a gut laughing), and whenever taking the article in a new direction, always do so in a way that contributes to the desired effect. Spıke ¬ 12:29 16-May-10

And (on your last change summary on Tefillin), if IP's do follow your lead and append to create listcruft, you always have {{Democratization}} at your disposal:

Nuvola apps important
Another Uncyclopedia democratization section

This section exists as a creative outlet for the anonymous passers-by who can't write anything longer than one sentence, and can't be bothered to make even that relate to nearby material or check whether it restates a point made earlier. Have at it!

edit Voidism

Oh yea! Nothing just needed "something", so I added two great pics, making 4 pics total. It's ready. What do you think, dude!? Cheers--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 20:22, May 16

I got your last message on Voidism elsewhere, and cleaned it up. Please compare now with before and check the changes. Cheers, bro!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 21:59, May 16

edit Master Chains

What did you think about the Gibson addition to the Scifi article? I tried to bring in the spirit of Neuromancer but I think I might have created a bit of a mishmash. ~Jewriken.GIF 20:32, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sir Mordillo, hello. I looked at it earlier and put a link in and added the word "cyberspace" which Gibson invented--at one of his lectures I actually had him sign the page where the word first appeared--and will go back anew and see if that section, which read well, has changed. I almost added Neal Stephenson, Charles Stross (is that the name, I misspell it when looking it up), and Cory Doctorow, but adding names may make the article topheavy. Be back soon. Al a few minutes later (I tend to be more informal on my talk page, slippers on and pipe lit)
Pretty much what I saw and liked earlier. I put a tweek into the last sentence to add P.K. Dick and smooth it a bit. Something I couldn't figure earlier is how to separate what reads like a historical quote on its own within the section. One of those quote bars, or a separate box? I don't use the quotes much, and have never made one of those boxes. Maybe a tiny pic to go with it? Al a little bit later

edit Spider

Join me, now. SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 11:10, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

I thought you'd never ask. I'll bring the candles and the wine. Al des chains 11:20 19 5 MMX
So, what are we going to do with the last 3-or-so sections? SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 11:32, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
I dunno. I like the Bite Symptom section pretty much as it is, maybe a few tweeks. The religion section is a one line joke that works pretty well by calling Hindu a Goddess instead of a religon. The transporter thing is pretty corny, should we dump that? I've got a feeling that a section is missing. I'll take a look at the wikipedia page and see what that one could be. The insect prophecy is pretty cool, maybe a little expansion there (it's fun to think that all insects have a prophecy of victory, just as human religions all have their end-times prophecies). Besides that, just "dance like you've never danced before" (and I should check with Mordillo on where that's at)[1]. Nice work. Al seven minutes later
If we're going to have sections about their bites and webs, we should as well have one about their physical features; legs, eyes, fangs etc.. See if you can come up with something. SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 21:10, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
  1. @ ~ Happytimes sometime in the past (far ago moments)....
I said if we're going to have sections about their bites and webs, we should as well have one about their physical features; legs, eyes, fangs etc.. See if you can come up with something. SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 07:19, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Regarding the intro, the part that says spiders are sentient rodents. Well, I don't believe any of them are random; if we are going to have those parts about prophecies, cultures, architecture and shit, then saying that they are sentient, well, makes some sense. And it's funny too. And saying that they are rodents is not totally random either; but highly misinformed, because, you know, some of those home and garden spiders DO look hairy or furry (at least, where I live,) so mistaking them for rodents also makes some sense. Plus I want to keep it for the sake of the "spiders, being rodents, reproduce by laying eggs" line, it sounds funny to me (granted I'm an idiot, but you don't want to upset me, do you?) SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 15:44, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

You convinced me. I like the family-friendly stuff, pets, etc., that made it seem okay. Ah, I see your reasoning about sentient, can we move that reference to the first indication that they are sentinent, in the lead that seems random but it would work well just before the first indication. You are far from an idiot, more of a camel humper but that's neither here nor apparently there. And I've heard that when you're upset that you put one of those ancient curses on them and they end up chewing the end off of their penis. Hey, I was just about to go to your talk page, which I'll do now. Al few minutes later
Good. Now, should we start whoring for votes? SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 18:29, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
The page is shaping up, some tweeks probably left (almost always are!). Nice work. On whoring (and what are Egyptian whores like? Yummy. Send me one or a few), I always ask people to take a look and if they like it, please consider a vote, and often I'll ask if they don't, tell me what's wrong and why it won't gain their vote. I consider VFH as a larger pee review, and comments on the page are usually helpful. That's why I think HELPME is very important to a page, his approval is something I value because he usually can and will pick out very quickly what needs to be fixed, or what needs additional work. Now, maybe your brother can vote but I'd suggest that he start to put some content into the wiki too. An then what about Ptok's Polish friends. . . Al covered with spider bites 20L19 21 5 mmx

edit Upsilon Upsilon Upsilon Sigma Sigma Sigma Sigma Sigma Sigma

Ok I joined. What are we doing? --Hugs and kisses, Black_Flamingo 16:58, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! Now we can introduce you to the beer garden, den of fun, and our personal troupe of whores. The present article is Chicken, and I have done literally nothing on it and deserve the whip (spending way too much time in the den and with the whores). The link would be somewhere on one of the USS pages. I also do not know when it will close up editing. I know nothing. Good to have you aboard the raft! Al des chains 17:10 19 5 MMX
Dude, I'm totally gonna join USS when uni's over in, like, July. SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 18:18, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

edit Sandy Clause

BRAVO!!! Today's feature. Cheers!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 21:25, May 19

Hey man, why didn't you join us at spider? SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 21:27, May 19, 2010 (UTC)
I voted FOR spider. And it got so good so fast my head was spinning. It'll make it!--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 22:01, May 19

edit Voidism

Hi Al, I didn't hear back from HELPME, but please check out all the changes I made in last 24 hours. Lots of key changes and edits and additions. Maybe HELP would like it better now. People mostly seem to enjoy it.--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 22:01, May 19

edit The Lord of the DANCE!

I may just have to change my userpage now. Thanks! (The lord doth work in mysterious ways... where would you like your temple?)  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  20 May 2010 ~ 01:00 (UTC)

Aye! The Golden Triad! And I greatly enjoyed your addition on the link page, way up in the corner. There is a whole section on Mordillo's page about mid-way on the topic. He's a very fair and open-minded man. Your words will inspire us all. Al sans chains a few minutes later
Geah! in the corner... he's a dancin' *grin*  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  21 May 2010 ~ 03:25 (UTC)

edit Peter O'Toole Wins the Oscar

Hey, I couldn't find a better place to reply. Thanks for what ya said! I've finished the speech part, but I don't know how to format it so that belongs to you or someone else. I figured I'd go for that Poop Writing Award.

Hey. If that's the case, about the no help thing, never mind, because I don't think I have a chance in hell of winning, to be honest. If you know how to format, please, will you do it?

We are completely unable to help with a particular article. Having said that it is our duty to help out noobs, and I'd suggest you have a look at {{cquote}} as that can be useful, as shown in Uncyclopedia:Imperial Colonization/project. Or find another article that has similar formatting to what you are after and steal it.                               Puppy's talk page00:40, June 5, 2009 Thursday, 22:19, May 20 2010 UTC
He's not a noob, has been a member for quite awhile. When he said to go ahead I did so, and paragraphed the page and did a couple other edits. So things already done there. By formatting I meant his paragraph structure, he had the entire page as one big graph and didn't really know what to do with it. It's an interesting page. Al sans chains 00:05 21 5 MMX

edit Great buggering bollocks!

I've had my internet capped until the end of the calendar month, which is going to drastically reduce my ability to get on here. Can I rely on you to get Sci Fi through to PEE review by Monday? I'm not worrying about the fanboy stuff any more and I'm not stressing about the bradbury fight - even though I like that one quote. All I would like to see is some images included into it, and extending that conclusion. I was thinking of something along the lines of how the proliferation of Sci Fi is increasing and the amount of technological advance that has been coming through as a result suggest that we are likely to have the entire world destroyed by it in late 2012, but that's just a rough idea. Thanks.                               Puppy's talk page00:40, June 5, 2009 Thursday, 22:17, May 20 2010 UTC

Will do, and that's tuff about not having the access you enjoy. What will you do for porn? I am confused. Sure, it can go to pee and then we will all have time during that process and after to continue working on the page. Will work on the ending, but hopefully you will get some access to work on it tomorrow or over the weekend. I'll tell people who've worked on the page that we will aim for a Monday pee request. Thanks, 'Al 00:09 21 5 MMX
Heh heh, you said "buggering bollocks."  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  22 May 2010 ~ 23:30 (UTC)

edit Have you finished listening to the song on my userpage yet?

After listening to it for the 100th time, I still haven't change my opinion that it's the greatest song ever. Unfortunately I can't convince anybody else to listen to it, as all my so called "friends" are into stuff like Kesha and Lady Gaga, oh woe is me. 30 minutes is not that long, anyway. ~Scriptsiggy.JPGTelephonesig Star Starsig Kidneysig13:54, May 22, 2010

(I especially liked the piano (how do they make it spin like that?) & singing & rockin' parts. Oh! and the hair, love the hair. Now excuse me I have to go lay down for the rest of my epileptic seizure.)  Avast Matey!!! Happytimes are here!* Happytimes.gif (talk) (stalk) Π   ~ Xkey280 ~  22 May 2010 ~ 23:59 (UTC)
Oh shit. There goes most of my jokes for my X Japan article. ~Scriptsiggy.JPGTelephonesig Star Starsig Kidneysig04:08, May 23, 2010

edit Mortal sin translation

Hi Aleister! I've read the message about "Mortal Sin". Your version seems to be more adaptable to than a simple article. I can't do that above all cause a lack of time, but i can ask to others if someone is interested... or you could leave a message on ours (with the hope that to someone cares). You can use my uncyclopedian talk, however. ---Zaza- 00:06, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

edit "Parting is such sweet sorrow." said the Red Sea.

Black Moses Striker2117 and
Black Moses
thank you for your vote!

Without you, the
Red Sea Parting Method
could not have been featured.

Also, thank you for your help with the article and suggestions, they were much appreciated. --Sirrah CatshirE Chess the Striker2117 02:32, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

edit Spider has been reviewed

Start working, I'll join you as soon as I get some free time.. SIRE FREDDMOOSHA Flag of Egypt AMUSE ME 09:16, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

edit Please ck your mail

An idea to improve Voidism. Cheers--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 11:57, May 23

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