Against. This piece has a charming premise but the writing needs work. For example, the sentence "Some times, sexual interseccion between them, this referred members, can originate someone who can see Abkhasia somewhere" should be rewritten as something like "Sometimes cross-breeding between drinkers and communists produces offspring who can see Abkhazia without recourse to alcohol." Sorry, but in my opinion this article is not yet ready for the front page. ----OEJ 18:26, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
Against. Moh work needed. MrNFork you! 18:30, Sep 13
The nomination was not successful. rm ⁻3–—Hv(talk) 13/09 21:31 This article did not pass VFH and was removed on 21:31, 13 September 2008 (UTC). This page is now archived; do not edit it, it will have no effect.
