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Article: UnNews:Limbo recalled in several countries due to injury risk

Score: -3

Nominated by: 1rageagainstme2 19:17, October 14, 2012 (UTC)
For: 1
  1. For. I'm fairly new here. But I believe this is realistically funny enough to end up winning. I don't know, let's just see what happens. 1rageagainstme2 (talk) 19:17, October 14, 2012 (UTC)
Against: 4
  1. Symbol against vote Against. Crude in several senses of the word; doesn't look like news, isn't based on news, and is a grab-bag of memes and swears. Spıke ¬ 19:38 14-Oct-12
  2. Against This is poo. News-Poo/memes+nonsense*unfunny(3*2+1)/69%=against --General of All Branches of the Military and the Head of the State Police Eric (talk) 20:40, October 14, 2012 (UTC)
  3. Against. ZhelielCow.jpg » Zheliel Talk Contribs Cow » 12:43 October 15
  4. Against. More in the style of an UnFeature than an UnNews article in my view. Also wanders off topic too much. LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 09:30, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
  • I want to be constructive. I reckon if you shorten it (few ideas are funny for more than a few paragraphs), link it to your original inspiration (there is one right? I googled limbo UN to see if it was a pun!), and make it more coherent, it will get a more positive response. The preceding unsigned comment was added by Leverage (talk • contribs)
    The original inspiration might be over-regulation at the UN, but if so, it got totally lost in the noise for me. I want to be constructive too. Author should lower his expectations of getting his first product on the main page. And, of course, read UN:HTBFANJS. Spıke ¬ 11:44 15-Oct-12
  • I want to be constructive too. It's "The United Nations has", not "The United Nations have". I do MUNs. Also I'd think MEDC/LEDC would be better terms to use than first-world/second-world etc, what with the dashes and all aye nice article though. ZhelielCow.jpg » Zheliel Talk Contribs Cow » 12:44 October 15
    Zheliel, FYI, the point of grammar is different from the US to the UK. Brits treat an organization of more than 1 person as plural. Separately, using MEDC/LEDC would have made my eyes glaze over further. I specialize in using the politically incorrect word Negro in order to portray the spokesman as out-of-touch. Spıke ¬ 12:49 15-Oct-12
  • Speaking of being constructive, I would vote against this and be done, but I think there may be an A for effort here. rageagainstme, your talk page will be visited in a bit here. --Globaltourniquet GlobalTourniquetUnAstrologer, UnJournalist, shameless narcissistic America-hating liberal atheist award-winning featured writer 16:12, October 15, 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol neutral vote Abstain. Some of it is good, but it's probably longer than it need to be and I dislike the memecruft. ~Sir Frosty (Talk to me!) Icons-flag-au 03:27, October 17, 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol neutral vote Abstain. Per Frosty. --POP!GoesTheWeasel Evil-clown 11:01, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

*Comment. fuck... 14.136.47.156 11:12, October 17, 2012 (UTC)

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