I'm not really quite sure what the joke is. Was this based on a particular event? The article simply says Joe Biden insulted all blacks and now Romney will win in a landslide. This doesn't appear to be satire or humor. --SirXamRalcothe Mediocre 13:43, August 27, 2012 (UTC)
I just looked it up and I see what event you're referencing. Usually, UnNews articles have a link to an actual article talking about what subject you're parodying. Even though I now know what the event is, I'm sorry to say I still don't find it all that funny. Perhaps, you could do something more extreme because this seems a little bland. --SirXamRalcothe Mediocre 13:48, August 27, 2012 (UTC)
Unvarnished advocacy. Rush Limbaugh and several of my local radio hosts have cracked wise in exactly this way. They are trying to win the 2012 election for the Republicans. If that is not the author's intention too, it is totally unclear. Remarks attributed to Obama are not anything he would say and are not the way he would say it. Last sentence might be trying to balance the ridicule, but is totally unexplained. Biden did indeed use black dialect to compare Romney's calls for bank deregulation to a return to Negro slavery (about which Sen. Rangel would later say this is exactly what Biden meant). But this UnNews, for starters, needs twice the length, a Source link from the published press to base it on, and a strategy, followed consistently throughout, to take the event in a nonsensical new direction. Spıke¬ 20:40 27-Aug-12
Ouch. That hurt a little more than I thought it would. Well, I suppose it's my own doing. I see that this is constructive criticism. Thanks for the tips. I'll remember that for another article. The Priest KingWeinribŽof Jupiter 13:59, August 27, 2012 (UTC)
Sort of against. I also have no idea what this is relating to (being ignorant of US politics). This also reads as an incomplete article. Having said that, it's a decent start. If you want to throw me a link to the original statements I'd be happy to collab with you on it to get it to a feature-worthy status. Pup • Talkies • 02:31 27 Aug
ow my ego. I know this is constructive criticism, but ouchies. Feels a little harsh. Probably because I wrote it. No matter. I'll take this criticism and use the tips in my further work. Thanks, guys. Also, no. I am a liberal. I'm just noting that Biden fucked up. The Priest KingWeinribŽof Jupiter 21:41, August 27, 2012 (UTC)
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