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UnNews:23,000 police officers are actually ice-cream salesmen (history, logs)

Article: UnNews:23,000 police officers are actually ice-cream salesmen

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Nominated by: IFYMB! (talk) 06:03, April 20, 2013 (UTC)
For: 2
  1. IFYMB! (talk) 06:03, April 20, 2013 (UTC)
  2. This may not be the best but it most certainly is not trash. ShabiDOO 07:10, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
Against: 2
  1. Symbol against vote Trash. Part of a spree of self-noms of virtually everything this person has ever done here. Spıke ¬ 10:59 20-Apr-13
  2. Against. It's a bit everywhere and nowhere at the same time. The lack of premise gives the jokes it has little value, and it's terrible random TheDarthMoogle (talk) 07:50, April 26, 2013 (UTC)
Comments

I understand the humour in this one as I see the source title at the bottom. You are trying to say that police are having to find more jobs to do so that it can be financially sound to keep a police force. However the picture of breasts has nothing to do with the story and you are not stressing the joke enough. There needs to be way more detail and content. Perhaps change it to an article about how a recent government report has found that UK Border Agency is made up of mostly illegal immigrant workers as this could be done with a better element of humour. You don't explain why they are icecream people. Say something along the lines of, "because of the national shortage of icecream sales men the police thought they could stand in for them and do extra hours of working." Sir ScottPat Icons-flag-gb Scotland Flag 1 UnS CUN VFH (talk) 12:27, April 20, 2013 (UTC)

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