Comment. I found this a bit jumbly Al. Why would Paos suddenly realise there was something missing in his life and it was soap. RomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 17:24, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
When the woman asked him to wash her, something he'd never heard of before, and it was so much work, he thought there had to be a better way. But I see what you mean, there's no transistion between that and him realizing that animal fat would do the trick. I'll get right on it maybe later. Thanks. Aleister 20:42 30-1-'13
(later that same day) Okay, the logical order of events as they actually unfolded is now revealed. Aleister 23:23 30-1-'13
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