Against. Sorry. I don't think that this article should be featured. Too short for a novel, has too many mistakes (should be reread carefully) and finally has only one main joke (which I don't really like). Anton (talk) 05:55, May 14, 2013 (UTC)~
Thanks for the constructive criticism --ShabiDOO 18:53, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
Against. An "UnBook" about discomfited partygoers having to watch dogs humping should not greet newcomers on our main page. Do I have to say this? Shop it over at Yuky Doody Pedia. SpıkeѦ 11:22 14-May-13
SPIKE you are such a dick. --ShabiDOO 18:52, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
Why do you criticize Spike and thank me? Spike also gave you constructive criticism. Anton (talk) 18:56, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
Against. I'm going to have to go against on thjs one. While the formatting is stellar, the content is... ick. So for once, I'mma agree with SPIKE. (D-d-don't h-hur-hurt m-me... S-s-SPIKE) I mean, the title has potential, but the content is too risque for my tastes, and I'm pretty sure many others. Sorry about this... (This is coming from the horniest 15 year old on IRC) The Slayer of Zaramoth DungeonSiegeAddict510 18:19, June 3, 2013 (UTC)
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