Uncyclopedia:VFH/Thanksgiving (Nicole Westbrook song)

Article: Thanksgiving (Nicole Westbrook song)	Score: -1
Nominated by:	→A (Fallen Reich)_{03:34 24 November 2012}
For: 2	Self-nom and For, my first article! Yipee! →A (Fallen Reich)_{03:34 24 November 2012} Yes. Plus the fact that I still have yet to get an article featured on this site. :( ~[t h s] UotM 05:15, 11/24/2012
Against: 3	AGAINST Everything about this is a worry. mAttlobster. (hello) 15:41, November 24, 2012 (UTC) Nah - Needs work. Although it's still better than my first article, which was a clone of International Page Blanking Day. -- Kip > Talk • Works • • 22:53, Nov. 24, 2012 Against. TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK 00:12, November 25, 2012 (UTC)
Comments	Thanks to Meganew and UPjcm for giving me some pointers on picture/video placement, you guys are awesome, cool, etc. →A (Fallen Reich)_{03:34 24 November 2012} Comment I think the youtube video at the bottom of the page is super tacky and in very poor taste. -- Brigadier General Sir Zombiebaron 03:37, November 24, 2012 (UTC) Removed. →A (Fallen Reich)_{14:50 24 November 2012} That leaves only the rest of the article: Not humor but a hatchet-job. Artist is an attention whore, her stuff is shitty, and she is little-known (?), from which we proceed to ridicule the lyrics. Needs cleverness, or really good writing rather than self-conscious false starts and out-of-the-blue irrelevancies such as the FBI and hookers, or a comedy strategy other than simple disparagement. Spıke ¬ 15:07 24-Nov-12 Abstain. —Sir Socky (talk) (stalk) GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 05:00, 26 November 2012 Comment. While I certainly love over the top articles, I think this is one of those articles that could still be funny (or funnier) when showing a little restraint at key moments, which would also make it a superior article IMHO. ShabiDOO 23:05, November 27, 2012 (UTC)