That leaves only the rest of the article: Not humor but a hatchet-job. Artist is an attention whore, her stuff is shitty, and she is little-known (?), from which we proceed to ridicule the lyrics. Needs cleverness, or really good writing rather than self-conscious false starts and out-of-the-blue irrelevancies such as the FBI and hookers, or a comedy strategy other than simple disparagement. Spıke¬ 15:07 24-Nov-12
Comment. While I certainly love over the top articles, I think this is one of those articles that could still be funny (or funnier) when showing a little restraint at key moments, which would also make it a superior article IMHO. ShabiDOO 23:05, November 27, 2012 (UTC)
The nomination was not successful. Negative health~SirFrosty(Talk to me!) This article did not pass VFH and was removed on 21:00, November 29, 2012 (UTC). This page is now archived; do not edit it, it will have no effect.