Against. Needs some more work. I think for the joke to work in my view that this 'Shanty Town' offer isn't a real choice at all. Otherwise, why move there? RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 00:41, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
Some of it's pretty good, but the problems already identified by my learned peers are holding it back for me as well. Sorry. --BlackFlamingo 17:26, December 14, 2011 (UTC)
Against. Same as the above + RAHB (talk)00:11, 19 December 2011
Comment. Is the terrible grammar and punctuation part of the joke? Won't vote against because I find parts of this incredibly funny, but I'm an abstain until the prose is fixed up. -RAHB 00:57, December 3, 2011 (UTC)
Comment. I see. Perhaps it needs a little proofreading? --POP!GoesTheWeasel 16:35, December 11, 2011 (UTC)
Abstain. I agree with RAHB. Don't want to vote against though. ChiefjusticePSX 14:04, December 19, 2011 (UTC)
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