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Article: Papyrus Containing The Spell To Preserve Its Possessor Against Attacks From He Who Is In The Water

Score: 3 Possessors Of Papyri Containing The Spells To Preserve Their Possessors Against Attacks From They Who Are In The Water

Nominated by: Egypt_orb_spinning.gif 17:41, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
For: 9
  1. Ankh smite Self nom and Bless Hope you like it Egypt_orb_spinning.gif 17:41, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Very Nice. Sir SockySexy girls Mermaid with dolphin Tired Marilyn Monroe (talk) (stalk)Magnemite Icons-flag-be GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 20:26, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  3. For. --Docile hippopotamus 22:00, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  4. Ankh smite Obviously. Yay Adoson!!! 15px-SBQ3.JPG 15px-SCBBQGPOS.jpg 15px-Jenny_Spy_Revised_Again.jpgWhore cHeDDaR 20px-Missmurder.jpeg 19px-Leprechaun_army.jpg 15px-TMMAN.jpeg 22:45, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
  5. For. I mean, *ahem*, Ankh smite Bless.. This article has a few problems, but it's also unique, funny, and distinctly "Mamooshie." —Sir Guildensternenstein 16:26, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  6. For I like it, it's out of the ordinary and funny --CrabPope 19:29, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  7. -1 water-based attacks. JackOfSpades (talk) 19:59, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  8. Ankh smite ok --Dame Sonjesig.pngCherry-blossom.gif 10:45, 7 May 2009 (UTC)
  9. Symbol for vote For. Sexy Chick Red kissZeitgeistKiss my ass 13:07, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
Against: 6
  1. Against Not particularly funny and the formatting isn't good. --Moneke 15:56, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Symbol against vote Against. The formatting is very distracting . Shame. --Romartus 07:42, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
    If I remove the whole format shit, will you change your vote? Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool Egypt_orb_spinning.gif 10:35, 5 May '09
    Now that I can read it....er. No. The main joke is repeating the title again..again..again. OK i got it the first time with the garish colours in. --Romartus 16:15, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
    no, sir, the main joke is not repeating the title over and over; that is just for pissing off the reader, the same reason Nile give their songs long names. The main joke is an alternate version of history caused by something that didnt exist, and a Nile reference for metalheads. Thats all. Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool Egypt_orb_spinning.gif 16:26, 5 May '09
    Well pissing off a reader seems to me to be a poor option for ANY article. --Romartus 17:47, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  3. Against As per Romartus, the constant repetition of the title and the not-very-nice formatting. I'll help you refine it if you want Mahwhatever because it is a decent base for a joke. And Guildy, if it has problems shouldn't they be solved before it goes on the front page? --Sir DJ ~ Irreverent Icons-flag-au Noobaward Wotm Unbooks mousepad GUN 08:21, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  4. Against Yodel monkey 15:59, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
  5. Against. Djdorama 01:16, 10 May 2009 (UTC)
  6. Against. I agree with Necropaxx that it loses momentum - perhaps it could be pruned a bit to be punchier? Plus the lack of pics and the general whitespaciness of the layout doesn't help. Finally, while there are bits I kind of liked, there weren't enough. I kind of like this, sort of; I want to really like it. --UU - natter UU Manhole 11:47, May 12
Comments

pee review here. --Docile hippopotamus 22:01, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

  • Symbol neutral vote Eh. It loses its momentum after a while, and makes it a chore to read. Necropaxx (T) {~} 15:16, May 4
  • Abstain leaning toward against. In a word, "eh?" Mnb'z 05:33, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Abstain. It's unique and not badly written, but I just didn't LOL. -OptyC Sucks! Icons-flag-us CUN17:56, 5 May
  • Abstain. Maybe I'm missing something, but it's not awful, hence the abstain, but it's not floating my boat --Asahatter (annoy) 22:06, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
  • abstain. i like it, but it needs more work. SirGerrycheeversGunTalk 17:19, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

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