Now that I can read it....er. No. The main joke is repeating the title again..again..again. OK i got it the first time with the garish colours in. --Romartus 16:15, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
no, sir, the main joke is not repeating the title over and over; that is just for pissing off the reader, the same reason Nile give their songs long names. The main joke is an alternate version of history caused by something that didnt exist, and a Nile reference for metalheads. Thats all. Colour Sig For Make Mahm00shA Look Cool16:26, 5May '09
Well pissing off a reader seems to me to be a poor option for ANY article. --Romartus 17:47, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
Against As per Romartus, the constant repetition of the title and the not-very-nice formatting. I'll help you refine it if you want Mahwhatever because it is a decent base for a joke. And Guildy, if it has problems shouldn't they be solved before it goes on the front page? --SirDJ~Irreverent 08:21, 6 May 2009 (UTC)
Against. I agree with Necropaxx that it loses momentum - perhaps it could be pruned a bit to be punchier? Plus the lack of pics and the general whitespaciness of the layout doesn't help. Finally, while there are bits I kind of liked, there weren't enough. I kind of like this, sort of; I want to really like it. --UU - natter11:47, May 12
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