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Ministries of the UK Government (history, logs)

Article: Ministries of the UK Government

Score: 7.5

Nominated by: Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 10:58, August 17, 2013 (UTC)
For: 7.5
  1. Symbol for vote Self-nom and For Published by the UK information council. Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 10:58, August 17, 2013 (UTC)
  2. Symbol for vote For. Good enough to run. But "Silly Walks" is a joke stolen from Monty Python with little value added, and the winks to the group don't make it all right. Spıke ¬ 23:38 17-Aug-13
  3. Symbol for vote For. But some work is still needed. Please, read my review for suggestions! Anton (talk) Uncyclopedia United 10:50, August 20, 2013 (UTC)
  4. For. 87.241.85.230 22:11, August 21, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Symbol for vote For., and I suppose the kinks in the page mentioned below have been worked out and now this article will be performed on the BBC. I for two look forward to it. Aleister 17:44 27-8-'13
  6. For. LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® 07:07, September 25, 2013 (UTC)
  7. For. Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 20:50, Oct 4
  8. For. Captain gull (talk) 00:00, October 20, 2013 (UTC)
Against: 0

No against votes

Comments
  • Comment. I think this article suffers from several problems or weaknesses. The use of images/formatting is underwealming IMO, there seems to be a lack of cohesion/concept between the sections. I think the individual jokes are humerous but that reworking the text a little would higly strengthen the humour. There are also several references that I think a non British reader would understand. Not that you have to pander to all readers but it might help to qualify a few of those references. There are also some phrases that I simply don't get either the meaning of or why its funny. Examples include: "what the point of these civil servants...ignore them". The Ministry budget paragraph. etc. I found the Pessimism section funny and very well written. Also the Chancellor of the Checkers made me laugh out loud.. ShabiDOO 22:13, August 17, 2013 (UTC)
    I've minced words in about half of the sections, transforming the example you gave; it wasn't cryptic to non-Brits but just cryptic. Writers are reminded that we are explicitly trans-Atlantic; there is no problem featuring articles describing one country (and using its dialect and predominant humor style) but you have to throw a sop to other readers around the world, such as enough background information to help them get the joke. This article doesn't really fail to do that. Spıke ¬ 00:09 18-Aug-13
    Thanks for the changes to it Spike. (and for the vote in confidence) Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 06:28, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
  • I know our Pee Review is very slow but I was planning to review this work. And even began reading a Wikipedia article about the UK Government departments. Can I still review it? Anton (talk) Uncyclopedia United 15:15, August 18, 2013 (UTC)
    Sure. Sir ScottPat (talk) White Ensign Scotland Flag 1 Compassrose VFH UnS NotM WotM WotY 16:16, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

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