It's well written, but it's not really my style. It's in a mostly informal register and tends to just state things in a snarky way rather than implying them (I don't know how to say what I'm saying, sorry). The small text in parentheses might do better as refs too. Or not. Llwy-ar-lawr (alt) (talk) 06:27, June 24, 2018 (UTC)
I don't think it's bad, really, but a lot of the sentences are really long and it kind of keeps going. I feel maybe if it was shorter? It might be really good if it was shorter with shorter sentences. DAP Dame Pleb Com. Miley Spears (talk) 03:17, July 5, 2018 (UTC)
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