Comment. I found this article a little difficult to read. The introduction seemed random and all over the place, amuzing, but I didnt laugh. The two chapters of genisis, was funny at first, but it seeed repetative and some what of a one note joke. There's so many places you can take an article on religion, the bible, gods, paganism. This article, in my opinion, would be a total riot if it covered something more than, "god makes crepes and explains it in long biblical detail", for instance The order in which things were created by god contradict science, two explanations of how adam and eve were created contradict each other, how long was a day before the earth and sun was created? was eve really made out of a rib bone? why did god create different species of animals that look like they evolved separately from each other, where are the dinosaurs? does god really need to rest on the seventh day if he is all powerful? Any of these themes could be integrated into the crep making narrative to give it some more variety and substance and bring out the great idea and humour potential in the aritlce IMHO --ShabiDOO 23:10, June 13, 2012 (UTC)
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