Against. Still not ready. Anton excerpts on Newman's talk page the comments from the first nomination that need to be addressed. If I read carefully, I can tell when the article's lists make a transition from true items to false items, but I never know what point they are trying to make. Spıke¬ 09:35 8-Oct-13
Against. As I try and read the article I can't help but think that a lot of the attempted humour has become lost in translation. Perhaps a map of the area showing the geography and where the many localities are situated might help non-locals follow it a bit better. As it is there are way too many foreign place names thrown at the reader with not enough humorous context. Captain gull (talk) 04:55, October 9, 2013 (UTC)
Your previous nomination failed, so you decided to improve on the article and renominate it. Good idea but unfortunately you have not taken in account comments from the previous nom. Anton (talk) 07:33, October 8, 2013 (UTC)
The nomination was not successful. This river runneth notRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® This article did not pass VFH and was removed on 08:56, October 16, 2013 (UTC). This page is now archived; do not edit it, it will have no effect.