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Article: Indus River

Score: -2 Indus River's 2nd nomination

Nominated by: Newman66 Visit my table here! Contributions My works 19:42, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
For: 1
  1. Symbol for vote For. This time, I have improved this article slightly, and it is, by a little bit, better quality (such as being funnier and better descriptions corresponding with the Wikipedia article). Newman66 Visit my table here! Contributions My works 19:42, October 6, 2013 (UTC)
Against: 3
  1. Symbol against vote Against. Still not ready. Anton excerpts on Newman's talk page the comments from the first nomination that need to be addressed. If I read carefully, I can tell when the article's lists make a transition from true items to false items, but I never know what point they are trying to make. Spıke ¬ 09:35 8-Oct-13
  2. Symbol against vote Against. As I try and read the article I can't help but think that a lot of the attempted humour has become lost in translation. Perhaps a map of the area showing the geography and where the many localities are situated might help non-locals follow it a bit better. As it is there are way too many foreign place names thrown at the reader with not enough humorous context. Captain gull (talk) 04:55, October 9, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Against. Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 15:13, Oct 11
Comments

Your previous nomination failed, so you decided to improve on the article and renominate it. Good idea but unfortunately you have not taken in account comments from the previous nom. Anton (talk) Uncyclopedia United 07:33, October 8, 2013 (UTC)

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