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Article: HowTo:Become a Master of Disguise

Score: 12.5 Voters who can not be seen.

Nominated by: Tophat headless 20:05, March 7, 2011 (UTC)
For: 13.5
  1. Symbol for vote Self nom & for I first saw this on the list of requested articles. I liked the idea, so I wrote it. Almost six months later and lots of work put into it, I decide it was ready for VFH. I hope everyone likes it. --Tophat headless 20:05, March 7, 2011 (UTC)
  2. For. I thought this was already featured? Gen. Fudgem0bile Set nuns on fire. Go straight to heaven. 23:18, March 7, 2011 (UTC)
  3. For. Aleister style ~ MimoMimomaxusMaxus 12:40, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Symbol for vote For. the links. Ha. Clever, fooled me. Edit conflicted, and then I see my name? Odd world. The page could still use something, but maybe while it's on VFH it can continue to blossom. Aleister 12:42 8-3-'11
  5. Symbol for vote For. Sir SockySexy girls Mermaid with dolphin Tired Marilyn Monroe (talk) (stalk)Magnemite Icons-flag-be GUN SotM UotM PMotM UotY PotM WotM 13:17, 8 March 2011
  6. For. Bastards. BobNewbie 13:50, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
  7. For. Yep Jackofspades (talk) 03:31, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
  8. For. Rabbi Techno Icons-flag-gb kvetch Icon rabbi Contribs Foxicon FOXES 13:28, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
  9. For. Sir Oliphaunte (განხილვა)  Georgia-flag-on-soccer-ball-vector 20:53, March 9, 2011 (UTC)
  10. For. i feel threatend by this instant reply on my comment. but wouldn't it be better to add some warning on the top of the page and just make the links dark green still? Lockdandload 15:40, March 14, 2011 (UTC)
    Oh no! I hope you were joking by saying you feel threatend by my comment, I didn't mean it that way. Anyway, I don't feel that a notice would be good, I think it defeats the purpose. But thank you for voting for. --Tophat headless 15:48, March 14, 2011 (UTC)
  11. Symbol for vote For. I laughed the whole way through. --Purple mini lolly Lollipop Purple mini lolly - CONTRIBS - WRITINGS - SHOP - Now adopting! 01:56, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
  12. for. --Black Flamingo 21:04, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
  13. For.--Funnybony Icons-flag-th Agnideva-small.jpg AGT-logo-small.jpg 18:47, Mar 23 18:47, March 23, 2011 (UTC)
  14. For It's funny. Now I'm a master of disguise! YAY! --96.249.253.161 21:20, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
Against: 1
  1. Sorry, man... this has come far from when I first read it, but it still doesn't really seem like it's ready to be a feature, to me. It may be the words. 1234 ~ 16px-Pointy 07:08, 12 March 2011
    Oh... Okay... Well do you have any suggestions? --Tophat headless 18:26, March 12, 2011 (UTC)
    Fix up the prose? I dunno. It'd help; a lot of it's pretty repetitive and choppy. 1234 ~ 16px-Pointy 20:16, 12 March 2011
    I see how it's choppy, but I don't know what you mean by repetitive. Anyway, I'll see what I can do. --Tophat headless 20:37, March 12, 2011 (UTC)
Comments
  1. Symbol comment vote Comment. Hmm... Needs something you say? Any suggestions? --Tophat headless 13:15, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
    Penis jokes. --~ MimoMimomaxusMaxus 13:24, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
    I have one in there! It says "Firmly grasp the zipper. Yes, like that, very good. Now, step inside your second skin. Very good, now zip it up. Make sure you don't get anything caught in there.". You see that link? That's what I call a penis joke. --Tophat headless 14:05, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Comment. i can actually see the links. Lockdandload 12:57, March 14, 2011 (UTC)
    That's actually the point. I had them totally black, but that looked weird. Then I had them a very dark shade of green, but no one could see them. So then I changed it to this. I actually want pepole to be able to see them, I just want it to be harder to see them. Anyway, why don't you vote? If you vote against, tell me why. Then I'll thank you for the constructive criticism, and then try to win your vote back. If you vote for, I'll thank you for voting for, and be on my way. --Tophat headless 15:04, March 14, 2011 (UTC)
  • Abstain. LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 15:19, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
  • Symbol comment vote Any reason? Anything I could do to it to make it better? You tell me. Thanks. --Tophat headless 15:23, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
    I thought it was a good topic to write about but didn't feel that you had explored the reasons why anyone wants a diguise or a back story about those who had used them in the past. Just felt a bit undercooked overall. When tackling a broad subject like this perhaps a bit more research would have come up with ideas. Also note the dialogue in Kill Bill about disguises (you can google it to see what I mean if you don't know it). --LaurelsRomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 07:12, March 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • By the dialogue in Kill Bill about disguises do you mean the superman speech? --Tophat headless 15:17, March 23, 2011 (UTC)
  • Oh... --Tophat headless 15:06, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
  • Sorry, you just... eh. I dunno. 1234 ~ 16px-Pointy 22:38, 26 March 2011
  • I what? I NEED TO KNOW!!! --Tophat headless 22:47, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
  • Skunk. It has to do with Skunk. Remember? (and by the way, congrats! This looks featured!) Aleister 22:50 26-3-'11
  • The fluency and presentation just do not work for me. Not like the last one I slapped a FA on, but that... blimey. Mind, Aleister's probably right, anyhow. 1234 ~ 16px-Pointy 22:53, 26 March 2011
  • I have made a lot of changes since he said that. Anyway, what did you "slap an FA" on? --Tophat headless 23:09, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
Something something. 1234 ~ 16px-Pointy 23:29, 26 March 2011
Something something something. --Tophat headless 16:54, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

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