Comment. Is the verbose writing style part of the joke? While its funny, the caption and paragraph links are absurdly long. Mn-z 20:19, February 24, 2013 (UTC)
Comment. I suppose it's fair to say that the style is verbose, and that is my personal style. However, I would contend that there aren't many sentences that are pointless. Additionally, surely stylistic issues are a question of taste? Apple the Great (talk) 01:46, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
This article has humor, but parts seem almost intentionally verbose, like you were writing an essay, and were straining to get to the required length. --Mn-z 15:00, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
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