Needs some heavy editing to get my vote. Too much focussed on the 'plot', which is then followed by a massive list of unfunny piffle. Needs refocussing to include references to the screenplay, production design, casting, post-production etc. There's LOADS of room for comedy. SIR MAC BOSWELL [†] 12:23, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
The nomination was not successful. Failed this timeRomArtus*Imperator ITRA (Orate) ® This article did not pass VFH and was removed on 07:18, May 15, 2014 (UTC). This page is now archived; do not edit it, it will have no effect.