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Al Capone (history, logs)

Article: Al Capone

Score: 11 lackeys whacked (or is that whacked off? I can never remember...)

Nominated by: <<Bradmonogram.png>> 15:50, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
For: 14
  1. Symbol for vote worth a look. I'm not sure if this is good enough for our high VFH standards, but I laughed a lot while reading it.--<<Bradmonogram.png>> 15:50, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. For...worth a look AND a vote, see? Or I'll send Tommy The Scrawl aftah you with a penknife, kopish?--Sir Shandon GUN (Talk) (Trophy Room) 17:45, 19 March 2008 (UTC)
  3. For --Sir Starnestommy Icons-flag-us (TalkContribsCUN) 20:19, Mar. 19, 2008
  4. For. Parsat, or, A Whole Bunch of Mischief 00:16, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. Self for --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 02:49, 20 March 2008 (UTC)
  6. F♥r. Nice article. ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF @ 18:41 Mar 20
  7. For -RAHB 05:38, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
  8. --L 04:45, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
  9. For. I remember having the same problem with all of my gentlemanly gathering locations that were definitely not speakeasies. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 04:59, Mar 22
  10. For Good swerves and puns, plus 1920's talk is the bees knees.--Count of Monkey Crisco 09:15, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
  11. For - Making of passionate love? Excuse me, Heaven is on line 5683. --”' PrincessCaitlai ”' (”'T”') 21:28, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
  12. For - Quick as a drive-by shooting --Knucmo2 14:24, 6 April 2008 (UTC)
  13. Yeah. --So So 23:43, 9 April 2008 (UTC)
  14. Ganstalicious --The Improver talkcontribs13:13, Apr 18 2008 (UTC)
Against: 3
  1. Against per Mick, and per a number of holes that make this a VFH-in-wait rather than an FA. --THINKER 05:33, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
  2. Against Feels somewhat incomplete, choppy, and the below.-Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 00:27, 2 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Weak Against As above and below, a nice start but feels somewhat incomplete, I wanna vote For but just can't while I feel it could be improved. --Sir DJ ~ Irreverent Icons-flag-au Noobaward Wotm Unbooks mousepad GUN 14:05, 11 April 2008 (UTC)
Comments
  1. Abst. My problem with this is that the mob-speak suddenly disappears after the introduction. It would be much better if this was continued throughout the article. -- 15Mickey20 (talk to Mickey)  12:13, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
    Actually, I know exactly what Mickey means. I still think it's VFHable, but I also think it'd be better if you chose one style and went with it. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 17:59, Mar 22
  2. Surprise Abstain Looking back at it, what Mick and Thinker say is true. Change it around some. -RAHB 07:24, 23 March 2008 (UTC)
  3. Abs as per the above. I'm not normally a supporter of the whole "vocal abstain" concept, but it's too large of a flaw to be ignored, and I really want to vote For when it gets fixed. If it gets fixed. Fix it. --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 02:08, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
  4. Comment Yeah, the abrupt change in styles bothers me too, but basically I just ran out of gangster talk. Since I don't get TCM, I'll go hit the classics collection at the local video store for inspiration. --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 02:58, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
  5. Two Cents: I rather liked the change in styles. The opening set the mood, then it changed into the encyclopedia tone we know and love which allowed me to take it seriously. Change your votes!--Sir Shandon GUN (Talk) (Trophy Room) 22:40, 25 March 2008 (UTC)
  6. @Cap'n: If you're still trying to work in more 20s-talkin', you could check out this link. - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 04:19, Apr 12

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