For This reminds me of past experiences. With apples not pedophiles though. Cool I Get A Signature 19:15, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
Against. Nope it aint there yet... good concept though but so short and so much more can be done SirACROLOKUN • FPW • AOTM • FA •(SPAM) 08:23, November 22, 2011 (UTC)
Sorry man, I really enjoyed the introduction but the "story" got a bit tiresome and predictable after a few paragraphs. --BlackFlamingo 00:09, November 30, 2011 (UTC)
Against. Read this a few times but don't see it as a feature. Sorry. RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 16:38, December 2, 2011 (UTC)
This is also an article that needs tweaking. There are a few cheesy moments that are unbelievable (not that any of it is). IMHO But otherwise its great and pretty funny --ShabiDOO 01:13, November 17, 2011 (UTC)
The nomination was not successful. Low health; 14%, +3.1234~16:06, 4 December 2011 This article did not pass VFH and was removed on 16:06, December 4, 2011 (UTC). This page is now archived; do not edit it, it will have no effect.