Against. An attempt at the surreal is always welcome but this doesn't work as a feature to me. It just seems random. I blame the topping and base. Sorry. RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 15:16, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
So the pizza bit is just a coincidence, is it? It's about garlic and doctors, mostly, and indeed, a lot seems quite random. Add to that formatting issues, a complete lack of voicing, and bits that just don't make sense, really doesn't seem ready. 1234~20:44, 16 March 2011
Against. Not featurable in my opinion (talk) 22:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)
Against. This has some potential but its not quite there yet. 220.127.116.11 15:15, March 17, 2011 (UTC)
People voted for the story. That feels nice. Like winning Iowa, or even that time I had a kid with Michelle. I don't know what Roman means about topping and base. Do you mean the garlic as a topping? President Barack Obama 16:41 March 16, 2011 (UTC)
Well Mr President, considering the quality of your previous works The Audacity of Hope, the pressures of the job are scrambling your narratives. --RomArtus*Imperator ® (Orate) 07:48, March 17, 2011 (UTC)
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