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Article: AFI

Score: 0 emo bunnies flying in a circle

Nominated by: SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 21:42, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
For: 4
  1. Self-nom + For I hate to self-nom, but I'm doing anyways. I really do think this article deserves a chance--SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 21:42, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. I think it's good enough. -Sockpuppet of an unregistered user 22:04, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
  3. Weak For. Get rid of the last few sections (starting at "But It Still Doesn't Make Sense") and lose the {{USERNAME}} stuff, and it's a strong for. Necropaxx (T) {~} 02:43, Mar 12
    Done.--SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 19:54, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
  4. Why not, for - Its good enough I guess, still needs some work though. --The preceding signed comment was added by Projectmayhem666 (talk • contribs). 09:46, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
Against: 4
  1. Against. Of course many funny Uncyclopedia articles are rage articles, but this just seems bitchy; more so than the actual band. And it's not funny. Djdorama 22:01, 11 March 2009 (UTC)
  2. Against. Some OK sections, but still feels too much like typical bandcruftery - listy sections, feels too ranty, bloody emo "jokes" (seriously, Emo jokes are more fucking annoying than Norris these days), gay "jokes", discussions on why they suck... Not as bad as a lot of bandcruft, but no way do I see a feature in this as it is. --UU - natter UU Manhole 10:03, Mar 12
  3. Againstish per UU --Globaltourniquet - (was TPLN) 05:56, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
  4. Against. per UU Mnb'z 06:11, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
  • Symbol neutral vote Abstain. - This isn't really feature worthy, its messy and a bit of a band article. Very promising though--Sycamore (Talk) 09:48, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
  • I changed some stuff. Changed the See Also and trashed most of the crap at the bottom of the article. I would encourage voters to look at it now, maybe I can get it up to 3 emo bunnies in a circle, as is proper for the band.--SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 19:54, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
I have a couple Gargantuas I'd like to sell you.--DRStrangesig5 Sherman Fingertalk  19:57, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
Thanks for your input on the nomination of AFI, Dr. Strange--SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 23:03, 12 March 2009 (UTC)
I wish I could add something constructive but the pee review pretty much already did that and you threw it on VFH anyway without making any major alterations. You are doing so now, which is good. I know that some people feel that major alterations of an article after a VFH is "weird" but that never stopped me from doing it as a noob. What I was essentially saying without spelling it out: I feel for you here, I wrote what I considered to be a funny band article too, about a fake band, and that page is VERY LONELY. After reading HowTo:Write a funny band article, I found out why a long time ago. You're already treading on thin ice when you do a band article. Don't be discouraged though and learn from the experience.--DRStrangesig5 Sherman Fingertalk  08:51, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
I didn't plan on nomming it quite yet. I changed it a 3rd time, and put in Pee Review a 3rd time, but the current one is was never reviewed after over a week of waiting. I was perfectly willing to change it from suggestions here. Sort of like an excerpt from an unwritten Pee Review, if that makes sense, which it does. I wrote two more articles after this. One is currently in Pee Review and one is nommed for the PLS Thing. --SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 19:42, 13 March 2009 (UTC)
Aw, what the hell? Who killed the bunnies?--SBQ3.JPGSmokin' Cheddar BBQ: The King of the Triangular Snackfoods 19:47, 13 March 2009 (UTC)


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