Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/releasimification

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edit releasimification

This a new article created by me. It was suggested by another user that I write some new material, and here is the beginning of it. So, am i going in the right direction with this one? thanks. -bobofosho

Bobofosho 00:02, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 3 I don't get it - it comes across more as casual racism than any insightful wit. And what is it - I sense you've got a concept which is (potentially) funny, but it's difficult to describe.
Concept: 3 See above. Could be a reasonable concept, but it doesn't seem to have any basis in reality or 'ting.
Prose and formatting: 5 It's an early draft, so I'll be generous. Maybe make the article more encyclopedic - intro, description, history, etc etc. I'd also try and use fewer brackets; rather, make those comments part of the text as they are relevant.
Images: 0 No images
Miscellaneous: 3.7
Final Score: 14.7 I don't really get it, I'm afraid, but then maybe I'm being too damn British. Maybe try again once some time has been put into planning and writing the article.
Reviewer: Gladstone 15:52, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
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