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125.24.160.39 23:56, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 7 This is my first pee review so bear with my, ok here we go! Overall I found the article quite funny, but all the names for the iApps fell short, It felt like a missed opportunity. Not all the apps for iPhones have i in the title so why do all the iBuaer apps? They don't all have to be funny as long as they aren't all the same, Just something like Allah-assist. The last joke fell a bit short with me. I think he should say something about some of the other equal opportunity devices they're going to make, like one for cannibals! PS. I really liked the full facial nudity joke.
Concept: 8 Not really much to say here, I like the concept a lot and I can't think of any thing that needs any improvement concept-wise.
Prose and formatting: 7 The only thing I think you can improve the way the CIA censors the iTorture part (Ok I know that's really small but hey I'm trying here!) Maybe use the these black bars and just make it all dashes, like so --------
Images: 7 I think at lest one more image would be welcome, I think you should add one of Steve Jobs doing a demonstration of the iBauer. Image wise I think that's all it needs.
Miscellaneous: 8 What i thought of the article overall.
Final Score: 37 I quite liked it and I think with a just a bit more refining (And possibly a review from a more experienced review). It just may be VFH material.
Reviewer: Fbi36 06:57, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
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