Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/crying

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Humour: 3 Sorry, dude... This one did not get many laughs from me. I won't say it made me cry, but I think you can do a lot better than this. Maybe blend some serious stuff with childish (potty humour) comments, or perhaps write the whole article in the style of someone crying about something? I think it needs something significant to lift it up to make it really good...
Concept: 6 Well we need an article on crying, so I can't fault the idea too much, but you can do better.
Prose and formatting: 5 I think the language which you do have is put together well enough, and can't find too many errors on this front.
Images: 4 Reasonable use of images, though the article is so short I can't really give you any more than this.
Miscellaneous: 5 (Averaged)
Final Score: 23 I think that there is a lot of potential in this but it needs a great deal of work to bring it up to being a really good article. Do some research on the subject matter, look up who the "great cry babies" of the past have been. Look for times when famous people have cried, and make fun of that. What reasons do people cry? Pretend that people in places or events have tried about things when really they haven't... I think there is a great deal of scope, but your simply not taking advantage of the possibilities. If you decide to do it, good for you, go for it!
Reviewer: MrN Icons-flag-gb HalIcon.png WhoreMrn.png Fork you! 20:30, 27 November 2007 (UTC)
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