Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/a super special visit from your coked up brother

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edit a super special visit from your coked up brother

Its that guy 03:22, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Humour: 9 This page is proof that when randomness is taken to its most extreme levels, the results can be quite humorous. The fact that it's about being on drugs seems to justify the randomness, too, making it funnier. I got some fairly consistent laughs, but their weren't any moments that made me lose control of my lungs or bladder.
Concept: 9 Once again, drug-induced randomness. I really can't think of more to say.
Prose and formatting: 4 Yeah, I'm really going to have to ding you here. I'm spotting you a couple points because it seems to fit in with the article. But, yeah, drugs are no excuse for poor capitalization and punctuation. Also, ease up on the large blocks of text--if I weren't reviewing this, I probably wouldn't have even tried to read it. The best content in the world doesn't do anything for you if the readers are scared off by the Great Wall of China in your article.
Images: 7.5 Abstract art fits in quite nicely perfectly with drugs. The tentacled monster is kind of enjoyable, but it's kind of stating the obvious. Add more images.
Miscellaneous: 7.4 Averaged via {{pee}}
Final Score: 36.9 Needs to be cleaned up and be made more readable. Maybe add some more images, too. That's pretty much all you can do with it.
Reviewer: User:Aethix/sig 03:09, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
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