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edit You can stand under my umbrella (and you can feel my antenna)

A spur of a moment - Rhianna's song as the Pedophile's Anthem. Worth anything? ~Jewriken.GIF 14:48, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Are we supposed to know the tune already? If you could record yourself singing that it might be pretty funny, but it doesn't work so well as it is. --Kelpan 19:38, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Hmmm....I thought it was pretty big right now, I'll try to do something about it...~Jewriken.GIF 20:31, 26 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 7 The joke is obvious, and well put, not too hard going, not too light, and with a good deal of sexual innuendo on the side, I like this dish best served cold.
Concept: 8 Excellent concept. 'Nuff said.
Prose and formatting: 6 Whilst structured well, it doesn't look so brilliant I could see my face shine it in. Those lines don't look too nice. Give a good bit of spit and polish.
Images: 8 Again, nicely done. Nothing really needs to be changed here.
Miscellaneous: 5 SPG is a bit on the tardy side, to say the least, and whilst I bear in mind that it's a song lyric, does it have to be quite so abysmally spelt?
Final Score: 34 A good article, very well done, just needs a few bits of smoothening the roughage.
Reviewer: --The Rt. Hon. BarryC Icons-flag-gb MUN (Symposium!) Sigh. Double Sigh. 22:26, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
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