There's a rewrite tag on Led Zeppelin, but I thought I ought to check that this is an improvement before I move it over. --Cap'n Sir BenGUNWotMVFHVFP 08:52, 8 June 2007 (UTC)
Humour:
6
It's very good, don't get me wrong. But I don't know, I found some of it to be trying too hard.
Concept:
7
Odd idea, but not exactly bad.
Prose and formatting:
7
Of course it's choppy, and sometimes a little distracting.
Images:
6
Very much lacking in this department. I wish I could suggest some more, but I can't.
Miscellaneous:
6
I think if you added some more content to the middle sections, and actually cut down from the introduction, then you'd have more going for it.
Final Score:
32
I didn't hate it, but not my favorite of your works. Still in progress, but get that crap off of the mainspace and work on this there!
Thanks! I know it still has a lot of work needed; I just wanted a second opinion before I killed the existing article. --Cap'n Sir BenGUNWotMVFHVFP 07:30, 9 June 2007 (UTC)
