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There's a rewrite tag on Led Zeppelin, but I thought I ought to check that this is an improvement before I move it over. --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 08:52, 8 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6 It's very good, don't get me wrong. But I don't know, I found some of it to be trying too hard.
Concept: 7 Odd idea, but not exactly bad.
Prose and formatting: 7 Of course it's choppy, and sometimes a little distracting.
Images: 6 Very much lacking in this department. I wish I could suggest some more, but I can't.
Miscellaneous: 6 I think if you added some more content to the middle sections, and actually cut down from the introduction, then you'd have more going for it.
Final Score: 32 I didn't hate it, but not my favorite of your works. Still in progress, but get that crap off of the mainspace and work on this there!
Reviewer: Sir Ljlego, GUN VFH FIYC WotM SG WHotM PWotM AotM EGAEDM ANotM + (Talk) 02:38, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

Thanks! I know it still has a lot of work needed; I just wanted a second opinion before I killed the existing article. --Cap'n Sir Ben GUN WotM VFH VFP 07:30, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

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