Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ United States presidential election, 2000

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edit United States presidential election, 2000

I completed this article several months ago, but it always seemed weak to me. The premise is an alternative reality of the 2000 presidential election where everyone is extreme nice to each other. Its structure isn't great, but is there something more? - Pingveno 07:18, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 3 Can you try to make it more rellevant.
Concept: 6 Good concept.
Prose and formatting: 5 Slightly Good.
Images: 0 No comment.
Miscellaneous: 2 Try faking it a little more.
Final Score: 16 Quasi-Featured Material
Reviewer: NXWave

The articles good but you need to make it more fictional than reality, I suggest you take a look at Featured articles and also take a look at HTBFANJS for good measure. --NXWave 13:11, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

I personally thought this article could have used some more truth to it. United States presidential election, 1960 is funny because of how true it is. That's just me. Oh, and you need an image, bad. One with all the states in their various colors and Florida in grey would probably be pretty funny.--<<Bradmonogram.png>> 12:58, 2 August 2007 (UTC)
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