Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ UnNews:Mad Creation Scientist Prays for Giant Robot

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Humour: 8 Pretty funny, some good punchlines in there.
Concept: 8 Pretty good concept, very new and unusual.
Prose and formatting: 6 Well, If you want you can undo it, but on a lot of the UnNewses I've seen, they do the quotes the way I just did. Also, you way want to keep each quote from a person in it's own paragraph. It's good that you're breaking up the text, but it feels like a bit much.
Images: 7.5 The image is good, and I like the caption.
Miscellaneous: 8.5 I found the article pretty amusing. I like the new spin on religious jokes.
Final Score: 38 All in all, a good article, but could be even better. Keep at it!
Reviewer: P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 04:49, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
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