||Pretty funny, some good punchlines in there.
||Pretty good concept, very new and unusual.
|Prose and formatting:
||Well, If you want you can undo it, but on a lot of the UnNewses I've seen, they do the quotes the way I just did. Also, you way want to keep each quote from a person in it's own paragraph. It's good that you're breaking up the text, but it feels like a bit much.
||The image is good, and I like the caption.
||I found the article pretty amusing. I like the new spin on religious jokes.
||All in all, a good article, but could be even better. Keep at it!
||P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 04:49, 3 July 2007 (UTC)