||Very satirey, but it almost goes both ways. As a catholic myself, I was both entertained and slightly offended(Not really, though)
||I liked the concept, it's great to see a new spin on Catholic jokes.
|Prose and formatting:
||Nothing much you can really do here, it being an unNews page. But, I had to fix 3 or 4 spelling mistakes, so take a look to see if I missed any.
||Not great, but 7 because there's not much you can really do with this one. Maybe a picture of Jesus?
||Remember, prudes have computers, too, so watch out for them. Actually, as religious satire, this almost goes both ways, making fun of how both religious and non-religious people think. It wasn't hilarious, but I liked it.
||P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 03:32, 10 June 2007 (UTC)