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Just cranked this out. All Led Zeppelin articles should have at least four references to them having sex with fish. --Littleboyonly TKFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK Oldmanonly 20:26, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 9 I digg it. The absurdist vibe works well, and I liked the references to Christgau's reviewing style. The Kool G. Funk quote was probably the highlight for me. The fish fucking references and some of the more random moments were a little lost on me, but overall it was definitely an entertaining read. Also, +1 for your use of the word "flibbertigibbet". Maybe it would help to up the ante and make it even more bizarre and absurdist.
Concept: 7 Despite the fact that this is actually one of the most atypical Led Zep songs, it's a decent concept. The concept doesn't seem fully developed though. You could probably expand some of the sections and pepper some more jokes and false quotes in there. As for the fish references, am I missing something? Were the members of Led Zeppelin part of the Order of Dagon or some fish worshipping cult? Regardless, I liked the fish thing even though I didn't get it at all. The Shark Week bit at the end was especially good.
Prose and formatting: 8 Well formatted in a normal encyclopedic style. The writing was clear and concise, definitely easy to follow. The article's short, but not too short, and the joke never wears thin. Definitely accessible for a front page feature, especially since this is a topic that many will be familiar with.
Images: 8 A guy who looks like Will Ferrell getting violated/eaten by a tiger shark in a bathtub? Works for me. The first image wasn't as good though; I'd recommend expanding on the photoshop. Maybe add some hastily edited lyrics, or haphazard changes in the musical notation. It's not much of a problem though, and the images do complement the writing well. That second image makes me question my sanity.
Miscellaneous: 8 I liked it. Definitely VFH bound, but you probably want to revise it a little and expand on each section a little. All in all good job.
Final Score: 40 Your sig still has the word "cunt" in it.
Reviewer: -- Phlegm Leoispotter * (garble! jank!) 21:10, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
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