Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ Reasons for the Holocaust

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Humour: 4 This could be much funnier. I liked how you used the fact that he also killed gypsies, dolphins, and homosexuals. Many people tend to forget he didn't just go after the Jews.
Concept: 5 Because of how many other Hitler-WWII-related articles, this isn't really an original concept. I think you could make sections of why he targeted each race and the homosexuals. Maybe add a section why he killed the Poles(maybe because his "pole" was so much smaller than most of their "poles"...), among others.
Prose and formatting: 4 There are many errors with this. First, it isn't really written like an online encyclopedia article. It should have different sections with their own headers, more links, two or three red links, and it should probably be spaced out better. I would definetly check the spelling and check for correct grammar.
Images: 6 Good images that go great with the article. The caption of the picture of the little African kids and the sac of balls was very funny. The other two pictures were just... meh... I think a picture of a dolphin sneaking up from behind Hitler would help get across the point of why he hates dolphins. If you need help making an image like that, go ask for it at UN:PIC. They should be able to help.
Miscellaneous: 5 Pretty good idea for an article, but poor execution makes this a high-risk for deletion.
Final Score: 24 If this gets deleted, I'd like someone to move it to my userspace. I think I could make this pretty good article with some work if the creator doesn't want it.
Reviewer: --Dexter111344 23:28, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

Why is this on Pee Review? It clearly says "Under Construction" on it. If anyone talks to me and tells me why I should, I'll review it. Otherwise, I say get it off the Piss. P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 22:59, 6 June 2007 (UTC)

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