Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ Lipsonia

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Humour: 8 Pretty funny. I really don't know anything about this country, so it's good that the jokes can be relevant to an outsider.
Concept: 7.5 Alright concept, country articles are important for any encyclopedia.
Prose and formatting: 6 Formatting could be better. It almost feels a little too broken up by the numerous headers, with only a few sentences each under each one. I really don't know how you could fix this, maybe you could use smaller headings or something. At any rate, try to fill out each section a little more.
Images: 7 Images are mostly good, except for that one that is a map of Lipsonia. It's too small to see the power plants, so I'd recommend making it bigger.
Miscellaneous: 6.5 Needs a better ending. I like the "Should I visit Lipsonia?" section at the end, but you need something to lead up to that. Something to set up for the final joke. This can be tough to do, so try anything that pops into your mind, and see how it looks.
Final Score: 35 Okay, so to recap, use less headers or more words so the page isn't broken up, make that map image bigger, and set up for the ending a little more. I think this has some potential, so keep at it.
Reviewer: P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon Baloon(Tick Tock) (Contribs) 15:03, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
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