Pretty good humor throughout, but there's a lot of room for expansion, especially regarding the "Lawrence the Cable Gent:Chimney Sweep" idea, which I think has potential for a little more than just two sentences at the end of the article. What you've got here is good, though.
It's a good idea, and what is there so far is good too. Has some room for expansion, though, as I said before.
Prose and formatting:
No problems heeya
The first image is really good, the second one is more on the "meh" side. But it works well enough.
hmm...can't think of anything miscellaneous to say here.
On the whole, 'tis an enjoyable article, though it's a little on the short side.