Pretty good humor throughout, but there's a lot of room for expansion, especially regarding the "Lawrence the Cable Gent:Chimney Sweep" idea, which I think has potential for a little more than just two sentences at the end of the article. What you've got here is good, though.
Concept:
8
It's a good idea, and what is there so far is good too. Has some room for expansion, though, as I said before.
Prose and formatting:
9
No problems heeya
Images:
6
The first image is really good, the second one is more on the "meh" side. But it works well enough.
Miscellaneous:
8.9
hmm...can't think of anything miscellaneous to say here.
Final Score:
38.4
On the whole, 'tis an enjoyable article, though it's a little on the short side.
