Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/ Lawrence the Cable Gent

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LeatherboundbooksTalkContributions 03:33, 13 June 2007 (UTC)

Humour: 6.5 Pretty good humor throughout, but there's a lot of room for expansion, especially regarding the "Lawrence the Cable Gent:Chimney Sweep" idea, which I think has potential for a little more than just two sentences at the end of the article. What you've got here is good, though.
Concept: 8 It's a good idea, and what is there so far is good too. Has some room for expansion, though, as I said before.
Prose and formatting: 9 No problems heeya
Images: 6 The first image is really good, the second one is more on the "meh" side. But it works well enough.
Miscellaneous: 8.9 hmm...can't think of anything miscellaneous to say here.
Final Score: 38.4 On the whole, 'tis an enjoyable article, though it's a little on the short side.
Reviewer: --THE 17:21, 13 June 2007 (UTC)
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