Lucyfer & his friend, Wlado! 23:54, July 14, 2011 (UTC)
||It'd be helpful if you made the article less random. Don't forget to check the Beginner's Guide for more info.
||I really don't know why you'd want to write an article about zombie Americans....but I suppose that's just the way it is.
|Prose and formatting:
||This article's really slangy....I think it'd be better if you'd get to work on that.
||There's only one image, and it doesn't really seem to have anything to do with the article....
||Like I said, this article's pretty random....some randomness is OK but don't overdo it.
||I think you need to work on this article more, no offense. Keep on working on it!