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This is the article on Youtube Poop, the phenomenon that is mashing up videos of Hotel Mario and Zelda to form funny videos. Recently, this has been marked as ICU, so I need some help in getting it up to scratch. Please review and help as much as you can!!!--Garionepsilon 13:58, 8 January 2008 (UTC)

Reviewed.Followedbyrocks 13:26, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 5 The article is too serious, what you've written is pretty much a factual representation of YTP, with a few little quips thrown in. You need more satire and more jokes (I think YTP is a topic where a few in jokes would be excused, a little bit of PINGAS and the inclosed instruction book wouldn't go amiss). How familiar are you with poops? If you know your stuff as well as you seem to, think 'How would a Youtube poop handle explaining what a Youtube poop is?'. Make the article have the funny factor of a YTP, but remember HTBFANJS.
Concept: 6 This is brilliant concept. Youtube Poop is a concept that has the potential for a brilliant article, but I feel you aren't taking enough advantage of it at the moment.
Prose and formatting: 7.5 You've got a good writing style and you spelling and grammar seems OK. Maybe try and make the article a little bit longer. No problems with the appearance.
Images: 7 Just a few more images perhaps? Show one of the YouTube Poop idents?
Miscellaneous: 6.4 I like the idea of showing a poop at the end. 'What is Spaghetti' was a good choice. And I've averaged your score.
Final Score: 31.9 Spruce it up, make it funny, do your best and you'll have an up to scratch article. Do little bit of research to get a broader idea of YTP (You seem mainly focused on CD-I) and to help you get more ideas for jokes. I'd suggest adding some sections on the YTP subcultures such as YouTube Poop Music Videos and the 'unfitting music' fad. Hope this helps. I don't want to see the article deleted, so good luck.
Reviewer: Followedbyrocks 14:40, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
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