Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Your Math Tutor(2nd review)

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I followed Saber's advice (for the most part) and think it needs another review Jackofspades (talk) 19:51, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...I have a lot I could say about this. Lot's of suggestions and stuff. But since it is my birthday I am waiting till tomorow. If it is still here I will give you a big ol' review.    Tagstit    talk    contribs    awards   05:23, 12 May 2009 (UTC)
Haha brilliant, love the last line, if you want someone to VFH just ask moi --CrabPope 21:50, 12 May 2009 (UTC)
And if you want someone to invade your nation, just ask ein volk. --SoIwastolazytolearnGermanic.jpg-kun "whisper sweet nothings into thine ear..." 00:16, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
Hey, how did you get in? Jackofspades (talk) 00:20, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
Outhouse   Tagstit   doesn't believe in new fancy-pancy toilet systems with running water and all. Just a hole in the ground with a lil' cover will do. Now gimme' your article and I'll be done in a few minutes.

While you are welcome to review this, I suggest you find another article in need of help so that we can clear the ever growing Pee Request list.

Humour: 4 It kind of dragged on for a while, and there were not very many good moments. Honestly, I think the problem is that the whole article is just one really long joke, instead of a bunch of good ones. I lauged at that last bit at the end, though
Concept: 7 Good idea, there are all sorts of great directions one could take with this.
Prose and formatting: 10 Good prose, good formatting, good third thing.
Images: 5 The first image was funny. The second one perpetuates that "long joke" think I was talking about. The third one was not very funny at all.
Miscellaneous: pi Why not?
Final Score: 28 Yes.
Reviewer: Two-oh-six-point-two-five-three-point-nine-five-point-five

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