Basically, this page was a piece of crap, so I completely rewrote it. Hope you like it.
* Flumpa 02:51, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
||While it wasn't LMAO funny, it was funny in various places, especially that sarcastic ending
||Its a silly concept, but its an expected result. Bad future. but, it had things that made me want to read it. it was funny.
|Prose and formatting:
||Its situated correctly, but there were a few gramer & punctuat'ion problems, as well as a few things being jumbled up.
||The first image was for added affect, so i understand. the Bush one at least had a funny comment, so yeah, and i liked the |midget short person image. needs more images.
||Needs some spiffy extras, but there isn't much to say about misc.
||A fine article, which i feel has a chance at being a front page article. Im not the strictest reviewer, but if you get a decent second opinion, SN&F this article and i will support you all the way.
||~ NEZLR 07:49, 18 May 2008 (UTC)