Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/You're Gay?!?!

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edit You're Gay?!?!

Aren't you the little crack-baby today? 22:09, 21 February 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 3 Oi. Jokes please. I found very few redeemable jokes here. I think the funniest thing about this article is the fact that it's written in the first person, which isn't that original. There's not that many jokes here that are that funny. It looks like pointless, homophobic drivel, which makes it sound really noobish and unfunny to most users here. Gay jokes have to be REALLY funny for them to be worthy of staying, and to be quite honest, this just isn't that good. Especially that god-awful ending. That's just offensive. The only time that you're allowed to be offensive on this site is when it's funny to someone else. And this just isn't funny.
Concept: 0 What concept? You're just talking to a gay guy. They're not THAT amazing. We've all seen them, they're not that rare. I rarely say this, but this is a pointless article.
Prose and formatting: 6 See, it's not all bad though. The writing itself was not bad. You're consistent, somewhat coherent and grammatically correct, (for most of the article) and your formatting is pretty good. However, watch that second image. I would move it somewhere else, since it makes that ugly white space at the end of the article. It's just hanging there on the edge, move it up some. Or, follow the advice I'm going to give you in this next section.
Images: 4 Just what is that second image supposed to be, anyways? It contributes nothing to the article and needs to be removed. The first image is okay, that's where these points come from. But I still don't think it's that good. The caption was probably the funniest thing in this whole article.
Miscellaneous: 3.3 Avg'd.
Final Score: 16.3 This article needs a DRASTIC rewrite. I think I could see this article being good one day, but it needs to be rewritten first. Nothing here is really salvageable. If you don't put some serious effort into improving this article, it'll probably end up in VFD. Let me know if I can be of any further help in improving this article.
Reviewer: ~Minitrue Sir SysRq! Talk! Sex! =/ GUNWotMRotMAotMVFHSKPEEINGHPBFF (@ 00:15 Feb 22)
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