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Inspired from IRC, this is hopfully alright - thanks for having a look:)--Sycamore (Talk) 20:17, 1 November 2008 (UTC)

Humour: 9 It's definitely at the right level of bizarre. Cheers for not going too far with any imagery. I have to say the martial arts section was my favourite bit. The idea of someone defending themselves with an alleged sex toy caught me off guard in a great way.
Concept: 9 Definitely not where I would have gone with it, but then again I wouldn't have gone anywhere with it...but really it's a nice one. Good take on the topic without being particularly offensive.
Prose and formatting: 9 Very encyclopedic, which is excellent because that's what keeps the whole concept funny and not just pointlessly vulgar. I think that all of the pictures being on the right side looks a bit boring, but that's just my personal preference. Very well written.
Images: 8 Like I said, all of them being on the right side made it look a bit boring but it wasn't too big of a deal. I think maybe a photoshopped picture of a Chinese martial artist practicing the way of the yad would be pretty good. Though some might argue that leaving it to the imagination makes it better--either way that won't make or break the article.
Miscellaneous: 8.8 The notes section was a nice touch.
Final Score: 43.8 Really solid article. Not much to say in terms of what could be improved other than what I said above. Maybe it could be longer, but I personally thought the length was dead-on in that you kept from beating the idea to death.
Reviewer: While this review may have not turned out to be particularly helpful, this user apologises and kindly asks you to refer to his pee policy-->NO REFUNDS! PaddyAtkinson 03:25, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
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